please feel free to comment, id like to hear your thoughts
okay, so for like one week I've been working on this flash, Normally it was suppose to be finished at 4th of July but well other things got in my way and since i couldnt finish it on time i decided to work alot more harder on it, so it got done now >.>; alittle late but its still good
and to think, this just happened one morning when i was bored, i decided to play around in flash and one thing lead to another and poof, i got this one week later X)
i must say i really enjoy animating, it is fun =D specially the things you are able to create, i know i still have things to learn but this is a good start for me, im hoping to do more in the future =) and maybe some voice overalls >>
Congratulations, Edgar, excellent job with this ^^
One thing I must say, however, is that sometimes the flash animations took a bit long to come into play. There were a few times where pauses were a bit...unnecessary and lengthy. I'm sure you understand. But I'm nobody to speak of flash I'm no flash animator, and as such I leave such criticism as a reminder, not as a true critique.
If you want my take on the language portion, however, I'm all ears and awaiting your signal, captain ^^
All in all, though, this deserves a fave.
I'll agree about the pauses, sometimes I was wondering if anything was gonna happen, but otherwise I thought It was great, when I first started in flash i couldn't make shit....lol most things I make in flash are still crap. I just don't have the patients for it.
If you use voices in future flashed I would take the time to make the mouth movements fit the words, it can be annoying and time consuming but it looks good o3o.
xDTHANK YOU for the comment, ill keep in mind for my future flash about the long pauses, =3 i think imma be lazy for the fit the words with the mouth part >.> x) and thank you again =D
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well other things got in my way and since i couldnt finish it on time i decided to work alot more harder on it, so it got done now >.>; alittle late but its still good 
I'm no flash animator, and as such I leave such criticism as a reminder, not as a true critique.
