- Posted
- Nov 6th 2009
- Mood
- Blah
I need make my writing even better. I need more detail and description in them. i also need less dialogue, i use it way too much.
if any of you reading my stories notice something else i'm doing wrong or anything at fault with my stories, please tell me.
i need you to tell me these things so i can become a better writer
remember if you notice anything at all be sure to tell me
on top of that i'm tired of all my stories coming out more like scripts than actual stories.
normally i try to let you, the readers make up your own scenery and worlds for the stories to take place in. the only problem with that is that i want to be my own world, not yours.
if you have any of you have objections to this decision let me know.
Voodoo Devil Doll Says:
I'll try. :)
Twilight Sword Says:
Well one tip I can offer (from one writer to another) when you do write another part of the story and you begin to describe an area or a person try and go over it one more time and see what can be left out without impacting the overall description. As for using too much dialogue... sometimes stories need more dialogue than actual description but what you can do is cut off the dialogue by describing if there are changes in what the characters are doing, like getting up or facepalming for example...
I hope this manages to assist in any sort of way... even if you probably already knew it
gaara4eva Says:
*nods* as u wish....