- Posted
- Jun 26th 2007
- Mood
- Dreary
- Music
- iPod songs
Due to a plot inconvience, I have decided to change the Title of the Comic. And the summary of it. Now, it may seem like it isnt important, BUT, it is.
As I was doing pages 4 and up, I noticed the way it is written WILL confuse people. Meaning, you can't follow through as to what is happening in it. Since it shifts from one set of characters, to another. Like they do in anime. To show you what is happening else where. As this comic does this quite a lot to fit the plot, I wanted to make a clear Summary, and Title Change to fit the readers point of view.
Thanks to the old title, you get confused easily as to what it is about. DeathGrey, what Tina is up to, etc.
So now, it will be called "The Great Rebelion", with Tina, Faoland, and Fenris as lead characters, along with Beth, Tasume, and Resident for side characters. The rest of the characters are add ins to keep the comic with a good plot, and a whole bunch of nifty characters! And the fact that I just LOVE people in real life, that I put them in it! Comic Summary is below. I find this one, easier to follow, then the other. =)
The Great Rebellion Summary:
It's summer now, for the wolves of DeathGrey. Though, it is going to be more corrupt then ever expected. Tina is up to no good, along with her sidekick and most loyal follower, Faoland, and many others, as they plan a rebellion against the Packs Alpha, Moro.
It is now up to Beth and friends to stop Tina and her companiona from prevailing in their tasks! But can Beth and her friends make it in time, with all the side poblems with their anthro enemies? Or will they lose to Tina and her Followers?! Find out by Reading TGR - The Great Rebellion!
* The Great Rebellion is a non-stop action Comic, that will keep you on your toes for every second of your reading time! Along with great romances and sarcasm, it is a Magnificient tale that will stay in your hearts forever! *
Now there is your summary for the newly named comic! I find this plot more interesting and ON TASk when it comes to the comic. Because with "DeathGrey" as the title, and the plot not even matching it all whatsoever, I find this "The Great Rebellion" more suiting for the comic.
And not to mention the fact that will "DeathGrey" as the title, readers might find the plot quite confusing. And I would hate that most definitely!
Note: I am currently working with my best friends > :iconrainwhisker: on the comic coloring. So YES, it will be digital. Her name will also apear on the comic cover. Do not question why, it is obvious, her coloring and shading skils overwhelm mine.
*IF YOU WOULD LIKE TO PUT ONE OF YOUR CHARACTERS IN THE COMIC, YOU'LL HAVE TO PAY THROUGH MAIL, OR WHATEVER SUITS YOU, FOR THE PRICE OF $2.00 A CHARACTER."
As the notice says above, it is true. I will alow up to 2 characters to be put into the comic for a small price of $2.00. Please send me a reference sheet, with all markings, and character description, along with personality, or I will prolly mess up your character. xD
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The Great Rebellion Comic:
Comic cover: http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1289384/
Page 1: http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1291177/
Page 2: http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1291184/
Page 3: http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1291196/
The Great Rebellion Characters
Tina: Coming Soon.
Beth: Coming Soon.
Tasume: Coming Soon.
Resident: Coming Soon.
Blue and Ayansay: Coming Soon.
Scout: Coming Soon.
Kacy: Coming Soon.
Kayrine: Coming Soon.
Janibell: Coming Soon.
The Alphas:
Moro: Coming Soon.
Akukina: Coming Soon.
Tina's Followers:
Faoland: Coming Soon.
Fenris: Coming Soon.
Nestra: Coming Soon.
Botolf: Coming Soon.
Role Play character:
Marc: Coming Soon.
Jay: Coming Soon.
Sam (me): Coming Soon.
Aran: Coming Soon.
Hamilton: Coming Soon.
