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The Hedge Hog
This biology mammal is the one and only hedgehog. This tiny little small spiny mammal is of the subfamily Erinaceinae and the order Erinaceomorpha. . There are 16 species of hedgehog in five types are found through parts of Europe, Asia, Africa, and New Zealand. There are no hedgehogs native to Australia and no living species native to North America. Hedgehogs have changed little over the last 15 million years, as one of the first mammals, they have adapted to a nocturnal, insectivorous way of life.
The Taxa-guide for the Hedgehog is as following:
Kingdom:Animalia
Phylum: Chordata
Class: Mammalia
Order: Insectavora
Five thousand hedgehogs on a remote Scottish island are being devouring lots of rare bird’s eggs. Some people are getting angry and want them dead so are killing them off. Some are being token from their Island so are being dieing as a result. Therefore, their grade becoming a C, because of result of killing it making this animal to become endangered species in the UK.
DarkOmega Says:
Okies
MentalMyles Says:
dem birds should've been more hardass to mess with a scottish island in the first place
GO HEDGEHOGS!!!!!!!
X Octavius Says:
Grade it, eh? Cool.
"tiny little small" isn't necessary. You can easily cram that into one word, be it one of the three or a synonym.
"15 million years, as" <- Use a period instead of a comma. Makes it seem like a run-on sentence.
The last paragraph can be re-worded a bit.
"Five thousand hedgehogs have recently been devouring rare bird eggs on a remote Scottish island. Some people grew furious and decided to kill them off themselves. Some hedgehogs have been taken from the island, dying as a result. Therefore, their grade is a C, due to the fact that killing this animal is making it an endangered species in the UK."
Overall, not bad.