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MithClearwell: Please give some help on my first tutorial? - Mar 15th 2007, 7:09AM Link | Report
This is the first tutorial I have ever done, and I would like to know if it is helpful to anyone at all. I know there are probably a million anime hair tutorials out there, but several of my friends have told me that they like the way I draw hair. I wanted to give this a try so that I could show people how I draw my anime hair. I'm not sure if I explained myself very well, though.

Would you all please take a moment to review this tutorial for me? I'm nervous, yes, but I can take constructive criticism.
http://www.sheezyart.com/view/1121949/

Thanks to all who view!
dwhisperer - Apr 11th 2007, 4:21PM Link | Report
Hi there, so sorry for the late reply, I thought that the forums were dead and don't check here so often, but thank you for using them!

Your tutorial is great, and I wonder why you haven't submitted it to the club? You are obviously skilled at drawing and have a good understanding about the flow of hair and how to map out its pattern. There are only one constructive point I would like to mention:

In the tutorial, the yellow linework is a little whimsical, and I worry that a beginner artist trying to learn from the tutorial might stuggle to study the shapes. Its visible, but next time allow the demonstrated lines to be a bit more bolder in colour.

Well done on your effort, it looks really great!
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