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General disscusion Forum: Asking for constructive critique...

TooMuchBlonde: Asking for constructive critique... - Nov 12th 2006, 10:01PM Link | Report
Hello! I am at my first experience into the world of yaoi fictions...Indeed I am writing a shounen ai novella about two original characters of mine.

I was wondering if any of you could give me some feedback about the novella's quality

I won't post it on SA...cause two of the chapters are a bit too much for SA (contain explicit pr0n...), but I give you link >>HERE<< and hope to receive positive feedback! Thanks a lot to whoever will dare to click on the link!
carmina1615 - Apr 24th 2007, 12:18PM Link | Report
idk about that stuff but im starting a yuri and yaoi club and i need help with it can someone help me? plz
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