long ago in 1900 in england there was a psycopath killer named Jake aka the slaughterer a mad man who killed over 255 men he was 3 years later executed. Now in the year of 2000 an orphan girl named Eliah has los her Parents when she was 8 due to conflict between her parents and the mafia so now Eliah wants to avange those pepole who killed her parents one day she arrived to the old libary where she was reading a book while she was busy.she heard a weird voice no one was in the libary expect from her so she heard that voice again after that weird thing happend she goes home to sleep and she see a creepy man in her dream and after she woke up the next day she heard that her neighbor died from a heart failure after that accident she heard knock in the door she saw her neighbor but he had the same from the in her dream she said what happend to you Chris he responed im jake. eliah was shocked jake? she said he said yes Jake the Slaughterer she asked him if he can help her avenge her parents death he said why should i she said you want to Rest in peace but your now just in this livin world right? he responed yeah so? well if you will help me ill send you back so you can rest in peace and so jake aggreed and now those are working toghter to take out those who murderd her parents. thats all so what do you think? sorry my english is bad D:

It looks interesting. And your English is good! You just need help with spelling. :] You should go through with it, it's something I would read.

Put quote marks around sentances when people are talking. "Like this. This is a character talking." The ghost of a serial killer helping a woman find the mafia guys who killed her parents. That's something I've never heard of before. I like the idea, but it doesn't seem like it could be very long. Unless there is something else going on. Something not obvious untill it comes in later in the series. But this sounds like it's going places.

seems like an interesting enough concept, but there are some problems. Most serial killers kill women, or a combination of women and men, unless this guy was gay? It would just seem odd that if the crimes weren't sexual in nature, that he would target only men. As well, over 255 is way too high a number to be believable, especially in a short time frame like 3 years. My advice? do some research on google or wiki and look up some famous serial killers from around that time and splice some stories together. You'll have a bit of realness to your story if you do that. As well, I think you need to work on fleshing out certain things, like how/why the girl is spared. what she does between the time her parents are killed and the time she meets this ghost that change her and make her want revenge and reveal things about her personality that are important to the plot. She would likely also have a reaction to the ghost, probably very frightened at first. I say go with this story, I think if you let it grow and brainstorm, you could come up with something really interesting, but think about all the different angles and make sure to flesh those out so that it doesn't become a one-dimensional story. good luck :)

Coolio. I would read that, have you thought of a name for said comic.