Kingdom Hearts Fan Fic.

by Runesman

in Completed Works

Kingdom Hearts Fan Fic.


The man in the dusty yellow-grey cloak sat in his chair. Next to him are Riku, Yuna and Pain of the gullwings Gull wings.

%u201Call I need for you to do is to cause a distraction, that will give me enough time to do what I need.%u201D

%u201CHow do we know you will not cause damage?%u201D asked Pain, the skeptical one of the group.

%u201Cyou don%u2019t, but then I don%u2019t want to make a fracas%u2026 yet.%u201D said the man. The man sounded amused.

%u201Cwhat will we get? Asked Riku.%u201D

The cloaked man snapped his fingers. A Chest appeared out of a hole 3 feet in mid air. The chest burst opened when it hit the floor. Jewels, Jewelry as well as palm sized gold, and silver coins popped out.

%u201C you get that and more, that is a down payment.%u201D

Pain lifted a gold coin. ( it was almost as big as her head) she bit it.

%u201Cow, its real.%u201D said Pain massaging her jaw.

%u201CYay!%u201D Riku whooped.

%u201CAll we need to do is create a diverison?%u201D

%u201CYes keep Merlin, Yuffie, Cid, Aerdith and leon away form the Hearless creation core. I will take care of the rest.%u201D

The gullwings teleported,

The man got up form his chair, he took 4 1 inch long, red crystals form his cloak.

%u201Csoon my children, soon.%u201D he said gently rubbing the crystals.


Mean while in radiant garden
Yuffie was fooling about in Ansem studie. The gullwings appeared.

%u201Cwha%u2026%u201D

Riku grabbed Yuffies shirikin

%u201Ccatch us if you can.%u201D Giggled Riku, They then took off like a shot.

%u201CGet back here!%u201D shouted Yuffie amused.

The trio passed leon in the hall. Yuna grabbed Leons gun sword and winked cheekily.

Finaly the trio poped in to melins study and pain grabbed Merlins wand.


The Cloaked man smiled under his hood as he watched the gullwings tear l around Radiant garden. He then teleported
Right near the main computer behind ansems study.

%u201C I just hope Merlin dose not roast there hides.%u201D He chuckled.

The cloaked man reached out for the computer, a wire extended form his sleeves and plugged in to the computer.

%u201CAway to me girls. You know what to do.%u201D

Inside the computer four 8 year old girls formed. All 4 have the same make up as tron except un-helmeted and neon pink. One has wavy shoulder length hair, another a pony tail, another hair down her back and the last had a mound of curls.

%u201CWhat%u2026 who are you, unknown programs stay were you are.%u201D

The girl with curls giggled.

%u201Cno worries hun, we won%u2019t hurt you,%u201D

%u201Cdon%u2019t bother with him girls. We have a job to do.%u201D Said the girl with long hair

%u201Che is a cutie, though%u201D added the one with a pony tail.

The Girls ran to a access port and the griped each other by there wrists.

Outside the computer the man smiles and looked down on the floor. All four girls appeared in the flesh, each dressed as a fortune teller heartless. Each with out cloaks or veils, and barefoot standing on a crystal ball five feet across.

%u201CRoll call!%u201D Shouted the cloaked man, All 4 girls shouted their name.

%u201CClara!%u201D yelled the girl with red wavy hair.

%u201CPenelopy!%u201D yelled the girl with blonde curls.

%u201CCandice!%u201D yelled the girl with black long hair.

%u201CPrudence!%u201D yelledthe girl with a brown pony tail.

The Man heard yelling and the sound of feet.

%u201CThe poor things,%u2019 Meaning th egullywings %u201CI hope they are not hurt. Penelope, you stay here and make sure the Gullwings are alright. Lie and tell The radient garden protectors that you were dared to come in here. After the Radiant garden protectors lead you out in to the town teleport after you are sure you are not seen, the rest of you, teleport home.%u201D

The man, Clara, Prudence and Candice teleported away ( the girls teleported like heartless)

The gullwings followed by irate defenders of radiant garden came crashing in.

%u201Cgive me back my wand young lady.%u201D said Merlin with his usual polite aplomb.

%u201CYeah,%u201D Said yuffie, %u201CEnough is enough.%u201D

Penelopy took one look at Merlin and burst in to tears. Rikku and Yuna came over to her and tried to consul her.

%u201CI am sorry, I am sorry I put them up to this. My friends dared me to come in here I needed a diversion!%u201D

Aridith came in.

%u201COh you poor thing. Did you guys scare her?%u201D Aridith said crossly

%u201CNo, but she should not be here any way. This place is dangerous!%u201D Said Leon.

Ariith smiled at Penelopy and extended her hand.

%u201Chere, I will take you home.%u201D

%u201CThank you lady.%u201D Said Penelope wiping her eyes, and sniffling.
%u201CBut I am an orphan. I can go back to the orphanage by my self. I caused to much trouble already%u201D

Penelopy took off. The gullwings teleported.

%u201CSomething fishy here.%u201D said Leon.

%u201CA poor little orphan, being dared the Gullwings to take on a cazy ride?%u201D asked Yuffie confused.

%u201Cwe don%u2019t have an orphanage yet, we have not built one, that and she was dressed as a heartless.%u201DSaid Leon

%u201CShe could not have been. I saw her eyes, I saw genuine fear and emotion there. I saw a heart. You cannot fake that.%u201D Said Aridith.

%u201CI%u2019ll ask around. Mebey she is with family here?%u201D said Yuffie.

Penelopy took a back alley and teleported. She found the cloked man sitting, Candice was standing at his right side on her crystal ball. Penelopy summoned hers The gullwings were counting there treasure.

She then hugged the Cloaked man. %u201CThey are scary. Especially that wizard.%u201D

%u201CYou do not need to be afraid my child. They cannot hurt you and won%u2019t. we have no beef with them.%u201D

%u201CPep is afraid of a bunch off humans? She would probably wet herself when she gets a lode of maleficent.%u201D smirked Candice

%u201CThat%u2019s not funny Candice. It was the wizard that scared me! You could just feel power radiating off him!%u201D Snapped Penelopy.

%u201CShhh both of you, Merlin is powerful, but his magic is erratic, and impratical, do not worry your heads.%u201D

%u201CWere is Prudence and Clara?%u201D asked Penelopy.

%u201Cthey have there task. You did yours child. Do not worry, your sisters will be back.%u201D



Meanwhile Yuffie gave her report to Merlin and the crew.

%u201CNothing not even a peep, nobody says they ever saw her. Not even Scrooge.%u201D

Leon came in.

%u201CThis is not good. Tron said there was a unknown user accessed the heartless creation device, and that girl matched the description of one of the heartless created. Though Tron is baffled. That girl is not a %u201Cheartless%u201D as we know them. She is something more.%u201D

%u201C Do you think she is hostile?%u201D

%u201CIf she was she could have killed us all.(speck for your self Leon, muttered merlin) I check Tron on the schematics on the %u201Cheartless%u201D That one has all the power and none of the weakness of a fat bandit and fortune teller. Both are high on the heartless scale. Even Sora has trouble with them.%u201D

%u201CI do not think she would hurt us.%u201D siad Airidith, %u201Cmaybe we triggered something. Maybe they were created by Ansem the wise to battle heartless?%u201D

%u201CWho knows. If she comes back she will be a handful if she turns mean.%u201D Said Leon.


Far way on the destiny islands, Kiri, Sora and Riku were coming home form school.

%u201CMan, I have missed a lot, remedial summer classes! One thing I hate about being back.%u201D Sighed Sora.

%u201CThat is what happen for being away for years. Have you spoken to Donald or Goofy Recently?%u201D

%u201CYeah they are fi%u2026%u201D Riku grabbed Sora by the head and pushed him down.

%u201CTalk talk talk. I am staring to feel like you are ignoring me.%u201D

%u201CHey Riku we are%u2026%u201D Stared sora.

%u201CI know, but give the yammering a rest, it is nice just to walk out here, listing to birds singing, I have not heard that in forever.%u201D

They walked in silence until a base ball hit Sora then Kiri in the head.

%u201Cowwww.%u201D said both at the same time clutching there heads.

%u201CSorry about that,%u201D said girls voice. %u201Cmy friend is a bad shot.%u201D


Clara and Prudence came out. Prudence looked sheepish.

%u201CDid I make you bleed?%u201D Prudence asked.

%u201CDon%u2019t worry, If there heads were any thicker you could use them for cannon balls.%u201D laugh Riku.

%u201CHah hah, Sora mock laughed.

Kiri Stuck her tounge out at riku


%u201CHere let me take a look, please it would make me fell better.%u201D said prudence.

With out a word she jumped gracefully on to Clara%u2019s shoulders and griped Kiris head, and looked at hit like a doctor. Kiri then backed away.

%u201COww careful you pulled my hair!%u201D

%u201CNo bleeding here.%u201D Prudence said Ignoring Kiri

Clara then walked over to sora, sora backed way. But prudence grabbed him, and repeated the process.

Riku all the while was looking at them warily.

Clara picked up the base ball.

%u201Cwe have to get going! Nice meeting you!%u201D

%u201CGiddy up girl!%u201D Said Prudence playfully.

%u201CYou carry me later, you weigh a ton.%u201D Clara said jokingly. And Clara skipped out of site with Prudence on her shoulders

%u201CWeird girls.%u201D commented Kiri.

%u201CWas I the only one to notice their clothes?%u201D asked Riku.

%u201CYeah, what?%u201D asked Sora.

%u201C they were dressed as heartless, and nobody else knows about heartless right?%u201D

%u201Cyeah, so?%u201D Siad Sora.

%u201CHow could they dress as heartless then?%u201D

%u201CThey could not have, it was probably the light, they were probably in a school play, and did not change.%u201D Said Kiri

%u201C I am telling you, they were dressed as Heartless.%u201D Siad Riku.

%u201CNaw, Kiri%u2019s right they probably did not bother to change out of there costumes.%u201D Siad Sora

%u201CFine. Don%u2019t believe me, but no 8 year old can hit two people with one softball.%u201D





Clara and Prudence were invisibly watching the trio.

%u201Cwow that Riku boy is suspicious But we need to get another pair of duds when out in public. Never mind sis, back to the boss with prizes in tow.%u201D

%u201CBut how dose the base ball count as a prize. I got a hair from both Kiri and sora, but the ball is a ball right?%u201D
Asked Prudence.

%u201CWrong. weren%u2019t you paying attention were you? never mind sis, the ball is magic, it takes the memories of whoever it get in contact with.%u201D

%u201CWould it not get our memories too?%u201D asked prudence.

%u201CNope. Until the boss turns us in to real girls, we are only human up here.%u201D Said Clara tapping Prudence lightly on her forehead. Come on sis we are overdue.%u201D Said Clara.

Both Clara and prudence teleported.



Leon stepped of his gummi ship with Yuffie in tow.

%u201CAre you sure he would be here?%u201D asked Yuffie.

%u201CPositive, The children here befriended him. Kari befriended them too. Besides Sora is like Aladdin, he hates quiet when something is happening some were else.%u201D

%u201CI know that, but he could be in the pride lands for all we know.%u201D Yuffie said.

%u201CTrue, but Most likey here, He Kiri and Riku are inseparable now, He would not take her were he could not protect her.%u201D

Just then a boy in a red shirt and black sweat band came up to Yuffie and Leon.

%u201CMan, Why is it always me, Now that Sora and Kiri brought their friend I am always getting sea-salt ice cream.%u201D

%u201CHey kid!%u201D Called yuffie.

%u201CYes?%u201D Asked the boy.

%u201Cyou said something about Kiri, Riku and Sora?%u201D

%u201CYou know them?%u201D the boy asked werily.

%u201CYeah! I am the great Ninja Yuffie and this is Leon, we are friends of Sora, Donald and goofy.%u201D

The boy relaxed. %u201CYeah Sora told us about you. I am on my way to get Ice cream for them.%u201D

%u201CThat can wait, we need to talk to them%u2026 now%u201D Leon said in an final tone.

The boy looked form Leon to Yuffie. Form the Look Leon gave him the boy decided to do as Leon asked.

%u201COkay, by the way my name is Pence.%u201D The boy said %u201Cthis way to the usual spot.%u201D



Hayner Olette, Riku and Kiri were listing to Soras reenactment of his fight with 1000 heartless.

%u201CSo Goofy and Donaled were chasing after The leader of Organization 13 I decided to take them all on.%u201D

%u201Cweren%u2019t you scared?%u201D Asked Olette

%u201CAre you kidding?%u201D siad Riku, %u201CSora is to stupid to be scared.%u201D

%u201CHey, %u201C Sora gave Riku a sour look %u201Cas I was saying.%u201D

%u201CSorry to intrude, Sora but I have a few friends of yours.%u201D Said Pence

%u201CDonald and goofy? Asked Sora hopefuly, After the Heartleds attacks they decided to visit home.

%u201CNo.%u201D Said Leon steping though the Usual spots curtain.

%u201CLeon! And Yuffie too! How is Radient garden?%u201D Asked Sora, delighted to see his friends again.

After he saw Leons solem look, Sora Somberd.

%u201Cthis is not a friendly visit is it?%u201D

%u201CI am afraid not. Sombody broke in to Ansmes Hearless factory. The Person created 4 girls. They are not Hearless per se, but are dressed like Fortuneteller Heartless. Tron has a better description of them, because he saw them.%u201D

%u201CIt can%u2019t be the organization, they are all dead, could it be Pete or Maleficent?%u201D

%u201CNot known, Pete is too stupid, and if it was maleficent, they would have found away to secretly destroy us.
He also suspect the gullwings were for him%u2026%u201D

Or her%u201D added Yuffie.

%u201CFortuntller Heartless, I told you too, Those two girls we saw earlier, I told you they looked suspicious.%u201D

%u201CYou saw too of them? Did they attack you?%u201D%u201D asked Yuffie.

%u201CIf getting beaned by a baseball can be considered being attacked.%u201D quipped Kiri.

%u201CThis is no joking matter. Those for girls have the power of fat bandits and Fortuntellers and none of there weaknesses.%u201D

%u201CThey have the power of both?%u201D Said Sora in disbelief. %u201CGreat. Just peachy, Fortunetellers and fat bandits are a handful by themselves and Even me Donald and Goofy have a hard time with 3 Fat bandits. But a %u201Cheartless%u201D that has the power of fortunetellers and Fat bandits. Who ever this guy is he or she is not playing around.%u201D


As Sora and the gang were talking, The Man in question was watching their conversation. Clara was hovering behind her crystal ball displaying the heros meeting.

%u201Cnot good, I was hoping they would take a few more days before telling sora. We will have to step up our plans.%u201D

%u201Cis it all that bad boss? They are just kids.%u201D Said Candice

%u201CKids that defeated countless heartless and nobodies.%u201D The man said. %u201C they are feared by the Heartless. They are also feared by Pete and Maleficent. Though Maleficent will never admit it%u201D

%u201CSo? What are they to such as we? The boy has trouble with three fat bandits, we are more powerful then that.%u201D Said Candice

%u201CYour arrogance and pride will get you killed child. Much like it killed Maleficent. She was resurrected by some stupid fairy law. Yes, You would not believe it, but Maleficent is a really evil and nasty fairy. That kid and his friends did for her, as he will do for you if you are not careful.%u201D


Candice became quiet. %u201Csorry.%u201D

%u201CNever mind Darling. I have a job for you. Go back to the creation core and delete the information Tron has on you. The more the Radiant Guardian Defenders know the more dangerous they are.%u201D

Candice bowed and teleported. She appeared right next to Ansems computer%u2019s main console. Her fingers flew across the keyboard. Trons voice was heard.

%u201Cwhat, what are you doing! Unadintified User, stop at once before I summon help!%u201D

%u201Cdo what you want suga plum, it will make no differnce, after I am done, My sisters and I will be a fair midsummers night dream to you.%u201D

%u201CStop right there,%u201D said a woman with black hair and black clothes.

%u201CYou must be the blonde girls sister.%u201D said Aridith.

Candice kept typing, she then hung her finger over the Delete key.

%u201CWill you will never find any more data on my sisters and me.%u201D Candice pressed the key.

Tifa attacked. she kicked at Candice%u2019s gut. Candice Caught Tifa foot easily and smirked.

%u201CYou might think you are tough, human but I am stonger.%u201D Candice simply twisted Tifas leg behind her and caught Tifa there off balanced and hobbled.

Candice smirked at Aridith, %u201Cyou were kind to my sister, and I really like your hair. I mean you all no harm, you are lucky I am Programed not to hurt people, I did not want to fight, but this idiot has her brains in her muscles.%u201D Candice then teleported away.

Tifa gingerly lowerd her free foot. %u201CWhat was that guy feeding those girls, she was stronger then my master! And what dose she mean %u2018programmed%u2018?%u201D


Aridith whent over to the computer and typed.

%u201CDarn it! She deleted everything on her and her %u2018sisters.%u2019%u201D

%u201CWhat she meant by programmed is that she might a highly advanced robot. One that thinks and feels. A proper term would be a %u2018artificial intelligence program made flesh.%u201D Said Tron

Darn it.%u201D Aridith said again taping her fingers on the console.%u201D

%u201CWhoa, you lost me, You had me at robot. But a Artificial intelligence program?%u201D

%u201CI mean she is something like me.%u201D siad Tron. %u201Cyou can stop trying Aridith, That girl deleted everything. %u201C

%u201CNow we are back at square one. Do you think she ment what she said when she said she was programmed not to hurt people?%u201D asked Aridith.

%u201CYes, If she is what I think she is, She cannot kill a human, but she can fight. And she is stonger then a normal human. What she wants is still a mystery.%u201D Said Tron


Back in the Cloaked mans Hide out he had two Cylinders each on own side of the room. In each there was a relaxed and sleeping Sora, In the other there was a Relaxed and sleeping Kiri.

%u201CHow did you do that Boss?%u201D asked Prudence.

%u201Ca Non-exact Science called Cloning. Now please, give me the ball.%u201D

Prudence handed the Cloaked man The ball He placed it in a box that connected to each glass tube.

A disembodied cool Womans voice said %u201CData Down load 10%%u201D

%u201C Now all you need to do is wait here. I have to go and check out something.%u201D

%u201CLike what? You are going alone?%u201D Asked Pudence.

%u201CNo, I am taking Clara. Ineed to check Ansems Data, he had a study under a mansion in twilight town.

%u201Cah. Okay later Boss.%u201D Said Prudence. The man tuned his back around an dlowered his hoold just abit he kissed Prudence on the cheek.

%u201CCome Clara, We have much to do.%u201D

They both Teleported. They arrived in the sandlot. Seifer, Fuu and Rai were as usaly standing around looking %u201Ccool%u201D

%u201CWho are you? What do you want.%u201D Seifer said.

%u201CI have nothing to say to you child. Good day.%u201D The Cloaked Man said Smirking.
HE tried to walk past Rai and Seifer but they Blocked there Way.

%u201CSeifer was asking a question, you better answer y%u2019know.%u201D siad Rai

%u201C I don%u2019 know what you are doing here, And I do nto like the look of you. Lower your hood.%u201D Said seifer.

%u201Cand you will do what boy?%u201D Asked the Cloaked man amused.

Clara steped up. Ronomar put his hand on her arm and shook his head slightly.

The cloaked man lowerd his hood, to revelal a white skin, white haired man. He was not old, but his hair and skin were the color of snow. His right was bright and lavender and twinkled with amusement. His leaft eye was coverd with a medical eye patch.

%u201CWhat are you, you are no around here y%u2019know?%u201D said Rai.

%u201CI am an Albino, my name is Ronomar. And I am just looking around. Ronomar smiled. He waved and then snaped.

Seifer, Rai and fuu had funny looks in there eyes, but it was gone just as quickly.

%u201CFine, But no funny Buissiness,%u201D Said Sifer. Rontomar walked off with Clara in tow. Ronomar put his hood back up.

%u201CWhy did you show them your face master? %u201C asked Clara

%u201Cit does not mater. In less then two minutes they will not remember me at all.%u201D Rontomar said as he passd the back ally leading to the usual spot.

Kiri looked up and saw Ronomar and Clara.

%u201CHey every one its that girl again!%u201D said Kiri.

%u201COh Hell.%u201D Mutterd Ronomar. %u201CRun Clara.%u201D

Hey Wait! Shouted Leon , Riku and Sora. Predictably all thre gave chase.

%u201CMan I hate to do every thing around here. Said Yuffie teleporting nija style.

%u201CYou three stay here.%u201D Said Kiri.



Donald and Goofy Just got to Twlilight Town. They had a logn and refreshing stay at The castle and came to Vist The gang again. They were just heeding to the usual spot form the station when a girl dressed as a Hearless and a Man in a Yellow and Grey organization style cloak came tearing pasted. Then Leon, Riku ans Sora Came by.

%u201Chey Sora! Wait up!%u2019 Yelled Donaled Giving Chase.

%u201CI sure wonder whats going on%u201D said goofy. Runing after Donald.

Ronomar and Clara Tore into the common tram area, and went though the hole leading to the woods. They then entered the mansion. Thery both went itn to the basement to find Ansems Computers Intact.

%u201Cah here is what I need.%u201D Rontomar he extended the same waire formhsi sleeve and downloaded information. He downloaded all the dated he needed.
Just then Leon,Sora, Goofy,Riku,Donaled,Yuffie and Kiri apeard.

%u201CAh the Her-o%u2019s, I was planing not to meet you so soon.%u201D Said Ronoamr

%u201CWho are you ?%u201D asked Leon

%u201CNone of your Busisniss.%u201D Siad Clara.

%u201CNever mind that now hunny.%u201D Said Rontomar lowerd his hood.

%u201CWhy I am her and what I am doing will be known to you soon. But know I wil not tolerate your interfernace.%u201D Siad Ronomar.


Rontomar moved leave the room, but the Heros drew ther wepons. Ronomar held outhis hand, Kiris Keyblade enterd his hand. Everybody gawked.. It warped and changed in his hand. It looked like the Pumpin head Keychain but much more gothic.

%u201C I will retuen this after I am done later.%u201D Rontomar smiled. He took the disc (it being done) and he and Clara Teleported.

%u201CThat is so annoying!%u201D yelled Sora. %u201CThey mess with your head then leave!%u201D

%u201CYou think your annoyed! He took my Keyblade! What does that mean?%u201D

%u201CNothing, He will only have it for a time. I took Soras once, But Sora Got it back.%u201D Said Riku.

%u201CThis is not good. We still do not know how powerful he is or If he means us ham or not%u201D Siad Leon.

%u201CWhadda ya mean by that?%u201D asked Goofy scraching his head.

%u201CYeah.%u201D Siad Donalad.

%u201CHe and his girls have not hurt anyone yet. Its not just good people and heatless.%u201D Said Leon

Rontomar again was waching them though Claras Crystal ball.

%u201CSmart man I like him.%u201D Rontomar said

Candice came running in. %u201CBoss! Boss! The woman you told usto look out for is here%u201D She yelped.

%u201CGreat! Peachy! I have too deal with her too.%u201D

%u201CWhat is the big Deal about her boss?%u201D Asked Candince.

%u201CSimple. Here in this world, or diminsion, or what have you, Hearts are like souls. I earned my Heart, She did not. She is also the woman that destroyed my Eye. Here she will have contol over the heartless. What she is doing here is unkown, but she still wants to kill me, or kiss me.%u201D

Never mind. The clones of Sora and Kiri are done.%u201D he wen ti n the room were the clones were.

He fliped a switch both cylinders opend and Sora and Kiria awoke.

%u201CWhat?.%u201D Sora%u2019s clone instinctively go in fornt of Kiris clone.

%u201CGet away from us!%u201D Soras clone said.

Ronomar simly side steped her and plunged the key blade in Kiris chest. Ronomar took her heart.

A Shadow heartles fomed, and then Namine came in to existence Ronomar chanted and struck the heartless.
The hart apeard in Ronomard hand but Namine did nto disapear. Ronomar chanted agin, his chat more gutteral He waved his hands though mysic passes and Kiris clones Heart entered Namines chest.

%u201CWhat di you do to Kiri? Who is that!%u201D

Namine looked around %u201CWhat? How?%u201D

Ronomar did the same thing. The process repedted, Ronomar took the clone soras heart, The lone sora tuned in to a shadow heartless and Roxas fomed. %u201CWhat!%u201D said Roxas/ Ronoamr chanted louder and the clone soras heat went in to Roxases Chest.

%u201CWhat how?%u201D Ronoamr was silent. HE grabed both by there arms. And teleported.

He landed in the usal spot were Hayner, pence and Olette were.

Hanyer got up. %u201CWho are you and who are they?%u201D Aksed Hanyer.

%u201CPence Olette, Hanyer!%u201D

%u201CWho is he and how dose he know us?%u201D asked Pence.

Ronoamr let Namine and Roxas go. He waved his hand an chanted, His voice high and clear. Pence Olette and Hayner Clulched there heads.

%u201CWhat are you doing stop!%u201D Said Roxas afraid.

But later, Hanyer Olette and Pene rushed over to Roxas, Olette hugged him.

%u201CRoxas! Were have you been we were worried sick!%u201D Said Pence.

%u201CYeah buddy you did not show up for school.%u201D Hayner said.

%u2018Whos the girl?%u201D Asked Olette courisly letting Roxas go.

Just then The heros retuned.

%u201CYou!%u201D yelled Sora. He summoned the Key blade.

Roxas and Namine got infont of Ronomar.

%u201CWait Sora, Kiri, Donald, Goofy!%u201D Said Namine.

%u201CYeah, I don%u2019t undstand it my self, but he gave us our hearts!.%u201D

%u201CWhat?%u201D said Kiri.

Ronoamr opened his hand. Kiri reached out and she had her flowery Keyblade back.

%u201CThanks for letting me borrow it child.%u201D Ronomar smiled Warmly.

%u201CI don%u2019t know whats going on%u201D Said Hayner, %u201CBut please met my best freid Roxas.%u201D

%u201CBuy he is a nobody! My Nobody.%u201D Said Sora confused.

%u201CWhat are you talking about%u201D said Pence. %u201CNo hes not he is our best frend.%u201D

%u201CNot any more. I decided to do my good deed for the century. I cloned you and Kiri, form your hiar, the ball that hit you took your memories, I cloned you and tuned the clones in to Roxas.%u201D

%u201CWhy?%u201D Asked Yuffie.

%u201CBecause I have not done anything like that for free for a long time. It feels nice.%u201D

%u201CAnyway Sora, all is not good. Even though Malificent and pete may be gone, I accidently brought a plauge to your world. A Plauge calling herself Grandina.%u201D Ronoamr snapped a revolving figure of a woman in a blood red cloak apeard.

%u201CShe is on a new world, a word you have not been too.%u201D Ronoamr snaped his fingers again and a bowl with werid shapes on it appeared before them. %u201CThis will get you to that world.%u201D

%u201CWhat? Why are you you helping us?%u201D Asked Sora.

%u201CBecause I came to help you, To destroy the heartless and restore kingdome hearts is all.%u201D

Clara simply nodded.

TO BE CONTIUNED




























> 'Entry for Mintapples Contest' by Runesman

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Nov 26th 2006
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So I had this puttering around. Since i have no scanner I might as well post writghtin cuase it the only other thing I am good at.

feel free to critique.

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jazmcdougall Says:

Here's a hint for posting writing on sheezyart. Go into the settings of your word processor and turn off anything that looks like 'Smart quotes'. That is the source of the %@304dDf #fjfkfds problems you're having.

Also, watch things like verb tense; if he 'sat' in the chair, next to him 'were' (not 'are') Riku, Yuna, etc etc. Try to remember if you're writing about the past or about something that is happening now, and also if you're writing it as an onlooker or as one of the characters.

Then, just be sure to check over your work afterwords. Just those few things makes for a much more readable piece. Hope this helps.

Sunken Woglinde Says:

I'm reading it right now...so far, I agree with everything Jaz said. ^^"
Also, you might want to add more detail to your writing, especially when not writing in first person. I always look at it as painting a picture with words.
The ajhjkahdkj akuri%$ around the quotations made it a bit hard to read, and it might be just because I don't play Kingdom hearts, but I didn't fully understand what was going on. ^^"
Still, good try, and if you polish it up a bit you've got a very good story. =D