well, as i said with my last charcter design: it sucked, and i would make a new 1.
this 1 is in flash, cause it has half a second worth of animation
(also flahs files are quite small, and easy to submit.)
well, i also didn't include a bio with the last 1, so here we go:
Name: karne joe "shrimp" yalley
Nicknames: shrimp, tiny man, swordfish of smallness, supermidget, shiny-religious-man
Allegiance: Swordfish
Age: 15
Skills: karne is a cleric, blessed with the grace of his lord(though his actions in normal everyday situations don't seem to show that at all
) so he has the basic following skills: heal other, repel damage(a mystic force surrounds karne's body, parrying 1/2 of every blow struck towards him, pretecting him from harm)
Rank: apprentice Swordfish
Personality traits: eager (so eager to the point where he sometimes stupid, depending on your deffineiton of "sometimes") kind hearted, defender.
karne was but a simple boy of the age of 7 when he lived as a stable boy in a fish village, when sword raiders attacked his town and slayed all of his family and friends.
but, they left him their, completely unharmed.
during this attack, he prayed to his lord to protect him and he came out without a single scratch.
he from then on held a grudge against all swords, and vowed he would oneday find the one who commanded the attack on his town, and that he would make SURE that he payed for the massarcre with his life.
with no one left in his village but him, he left on a search for a new life.
a new life in which he could train his skills untill he was prepared to take on the swords.
this search took him to a nearby abbey of his religion, in which he trianed in the arts of clericry.
by his 13th birthday, the a abbot had found that karne was his most potent cleric, and sent karne away to join the fish's in the war.
karne was on his way to the fish base when he found an ambushed swordfish soilder fighting for his life against 4 swords.
karne's rage got the best of him, and he jumped from his hiding place, and slew them all without mercy, swinging his hammer as strongly as he could.
when they were all dead, karne healed the swordfish, who told karne he had extrodaniry talents, and he would be hounered if karne were to join his faction, karne then spent the next few years of his life training,
awaiting the time when one of the elite would tell him he would finnaly have his chance to go out, and find his village's killer.
vengence would be his.
no matter the cost.
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