This is cute!
Such a nasty little chord you're playing. And yet, the solo on top brings it together. You really picked your notes well.
Can't say I'm too wowed with the performance, but I don't think that's what you were going for anyway. This is a neat little package. Reminds me of something rural. Where everything is winding down. Like at that orangey-purpleish end-of-the-day time.
Even the rhythm has a nice "ride" feeling about it. Like the whole tune is just bobbing gently up and down. Something like the horses on a carousel.
And the single notes have such character about them. They're very assertive, yet seemingly graceful against the off-chord backdrop. The jazzy way they pop in and out with only a tenuous tempo put with the bouncy melody makes me think of dancers, just trying to keep in step.
My only minor complaint is that the single note comes in a TAD too soon towards the beginning there. But then, it's hard to say that, given the unreliability of the other notes. *shrug*
But I think it's irksome enough for me to say something.
ah,I liked when the top recording came in.The beginning few chords was nice,I think if you worked on those and added to it,it'd sound like a good song.
Just work on that a bit and I'm sure you could make a really cool piece.
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1076 Says:
Aha ha!
This is cute!
Such a nasty little chord you're playing. And yet, the solo on top brings it together. You really picked your notes well.
Can't say I'm too wowed with the performance, but I don't think that's what you were going for anyway. This is a neat little package. Reminds me of something rural. Where everything is winding down. Like at that orangey-purpleish end-of-the-day time.
Even the rhythm has a nice "ride" feeling about it. Like the whole tune is just bobbing gently up and down. Something like the horses on a carousel.
And the single notes have such character about them. They're very assertive, yet seemingly graceful against the off-chord backdrop. The jazzy way they pop in and out with only a tenuous tempo put with the bouncy melody makes me think of dancers, just trying to keep in step.
My only minor complaint is that the single note comes in a TAD too soon towards the beginning there. But then, it's hard to say that, given the unreliability of the other notes. *shrug*
But I think it's irksome enough for me to say something.
Anyway, I really liked this. Very cute.
1076
Pennyroll Says:
ah,I liked when the top recording came in.The beginning few chords was nice,I think if you worked on those and added to it,it'd sound like a good song.
Just work on that a bit and I'm sure you could make a really cool piece.
^-^