(3:32) - As promised the full version with some beautiful vocals by
. You should check out his stuff too, it's good shit! \m/
This is the completed version of the tune. I'm really proud of this piece, it turned out better than I thought. Yes...I would consider it as my "own little masterpiece".
Of course this tune would not be as good as it is without those touching lyrics and vocals by
Machete aka Bad-Man-Incorporated. Thanks a bunch again for that buddy, I owe ya!!
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Oh yeah...it's our first "real" collab. haha.
Lyrics:
Standin in the cold
Watchin from outside
People all warm and
filled with glee
Its christmas time
in a world that
Doesn't include me
Feel like I'm not alone tonite
Everybody walks by me remembers
I am here for the night
Here in the cold
Alone
Till the morning light
Take my life
Take my pain
On a day that helps me see
Everything might be alright
with in humanity
Kindness winds in the snow that blows
And the flames that warm your heart from the lows
I can see and I can feel
Everthing I need to now
Take my hand and take my friendship
Let me take your place inside
Take my hand and take my pain
let it guide you
Through the night
Kindness winds in the snow that blows
And the flames that Warm your heart from the lows
I can see and I can feel
Everything I need to now for sure
Christmas time restores my faith
In what we all are here for
Wanna download the tune? Visit my
audioprofile on newgrounds.com. In case you have an account there, drop me a comment or something.
A world so cold is (c) DarKsidE / 2006
Lyrics are (c) Machete / 2006
Edit:
Thanks a lot for the frontpage boys and gurls! ^^
Comments
Machete Says:
Man, I signed on to see if you put this on yet. You hadn't. As I signed out...it showed up on the homepage as a new submission. Sooooo...I signed my tired ass back in to give it a fav and masterpiece.
So wooo.
Lenali Says:
Overall, I like it a lot. =D
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- I think the vocal should be a wee bit louder. It's melding too much with the music, and making it sound more...noisy than anything, for lack of a better word. Almost like it's oof beat.
Just one problem (in my opinion... >>
..I'ono. I'm no professional. I like it, though. Great job! =3
Neo Arcane Says:
Now "THIS" edition of this song
I like, no...LOVE the best!!
I wonder if you'll be usin' it as part
of your ID for Xmas?
BTW, I faved & masterpieced it!
Cobalt89 Says:
Very nice. Best believe I'm downloading it. And rating it good on newgrounds. Very good song, lyrics and all.
beautiful lyrics...I love song packed with emotions and storie like words...
Yronsparx Says:
I agree that the vocals could be a bit louder. Apart from that:
It's my favourite of your songs so far!
I love the lyrics carrying you along the guitar "waves". Really great!
Donut Says:
"Feel like I'm not alone tonite
fav'd and masterpieced
Everybody walks by me remembers
I am here for the night
Here in the cold
Alone
Till the morning light"
that was my favorite part of the song X3 very very well done to both of ya
Tang nga Pinoy Says:
uh oh...i see myself clicking Fav n MP again =O
Sonic2021 Says:
I sang along with it....awesome song! Totally a fav.
AngelsDontKill Says:
Very nice, well sung, and well played! I actually jammed a short distorted solo over it and it flowed awsome tehehe. It doesn't actually remind me much of Christmas time personally. It kinda reminds me of sitting by a lake while it's snowing and watching it all disapear in the water. Okay, that sounded emo. But yeah, great song!