An Unknown experience

by Zana

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Oct 30th 2006
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Some random girl I doodled while at work earlier today. No clue who she is or anything like that. And I couldn't really think of anything better to title it, so yeah...

I rather like how she came out, though not her bottom half... This was done in pen (obviouslty) which is why I'm almost proud of it.

Okay, totally off the top of my head! Her name is...... Atherra! Umn..... Her background is........ She's a happy young 17 year old who goes to college and works full time. Here she is preparing for a fancy shin-dig her parents are going to bring her to because she turns 18 in a month. But on their way home, her parents are to get in a car accident. So now Atherra is going to have to quit school and pick up more hours at work so she can try and adopt her 2 younger siblings, as she doesn't trust the rest of her family or any other people to look after them. But since she isn't 18 yet, Atherra herself is going to be put into foster care until her birthday, along with her siblings, Zaquary(15) and Wren(9). Durring this time, Atherra and her siblings are sent to a foster home, a large "farm" in the country where half a dozen other foster children are living for the time. The woman who takes them in is very loving and trustworthy, and even Atherra warms up to her gradually. So, (because I'm a sap) there is this guy there who is also 17, but turns 18 in 2 weeks (so for those who can't do math, he's 2 weeks older than Atherra) who's name is Psymon and also has a younger sister, Enya(7). So obviously Atherra starts getting feelings for Psymon durring their short time together, and Psymon stays at the house after he turns 18 to watch over Enya, the same way Atherra stays at the house after she turns 18 to watch over Zaq and Wren. So eventually Atherra goes to court about adopting her siblings, and one thing leads to another, and she loses the case, and the kids are to go into an adoption agency and Atherra is forced to move out of Momma Karren's house (I just decided to name the nice woman that) and so there's this big thing where Atherra is packing up Zaq and Wren and her own things into Momma Karren's van to go I don't know where yet, and it's raining, and Psymon is off standing alone while Atherra is mainly doing all the packing because Zaq and Wren are saying goodby to Enya and their other friends, and then Atherra gets really mad and goes over and starts beating up Psymon because she wants him to know how much pain she is feeling ebcause of all of this, even if it's not the same, because he's not showing any sort of emotion, and Psymon is just taking the beating and then grabs Atherra's shoulders and kisses her (mind you they are standing in the rain, it sounds so sweet...) and then Atherra pulls away form him when she hears a car horn and runs back to the van before anything can be said and she just cries the whole way to dropping off Zaq and Wren at the adoption agency. Then Momma Karren brings Atherra to an apartment building where she's rented a place, and before she goes, Momma Karren says she's going to fight her hardest to adopt Zaq and Wren for Atherra. So Atherra and Momma Karren hadn't told anyone about where Atherra was moving to, but then about 2 weeks later, Psymon shows up at her door (durring another rainy night) and I'm not sure if I want one thing to lead to another, maybe, but anyways! They admit they love eachother (Yay!) and then later the next day (Psymon stays the night) Momma Karren shows up with Zaq and Wren for a visit (Yay!) and tell Atherra that things are going smoothly and hopefully the three siblings will be able to get back to Momma Karren's soon (Yay!) and maybe that all sounds way too corny... Not sure.

Jeeze, did I take up enough room...? That was all totally off the top of my head... I guess when I get going I just go! Maybe I'll turn this into a comic... Any aspiring Manga-ka's out there wanna help??!? Lol. ^^

Art and Story (c) ME! ~ Zana

Comments

Longinius Says:

*phew*
Damn it took a while to read...

Ahh, what a nice story... I like it. Just one question. What's a shin-dig?
And for you to just randomly spew a background to her is kinda... extraordinary. I can do that too but not many people can.

And the pic is nice too, but the black smudge around her is weird... :/

xero pain Says:

cute pic Zana

Katie L Says:

Awww, it's one of those stories that makes you want to cry.

I love the picture. Pen is fun to draw in.

oogami Says:

shes cute~~~ Nice artwork`!^^