A Smile for Your Soul

by Daydy

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A Smile for Your Soul

Through teary eyes I see you,
And as if for the first time
You stand in my doorway,
And I smile
At the scent of the roses in your hands.
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Nov 20th 2004
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A cute little poem. Another quickie, but I kinda liked it...Kinda....

(c) Daydy, 2004. This goes for all my work, even if I forget to put it on their page....Hehehehe....

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black phoenix Says:

simple and effective. nicely done, daydy. i usually dont like writing like this(topic of love/relationships/etc.) but youve made an exception.

Daydy Says:

Thankyou. I was hoping to portray a mixture of emotions- not exactly happiness, yet not sadness either. I like to be vague and let the reader decide.