Fish vs Sword; Building a Chara

alright alright, so i was in the sketcher on artgrounds, and started doodling this. =3 unfortunately, after only a half hour, i had to go. ;x; so it is unfinished, and always will be. T-T

but i wanted to show you guys several things. first of all, prob the first thing that pops out at ya, is that this is not my usual style! omg!!! yes, thats right, i have adopted a new style. =3 im still working out some fime things, but i am -extremely- happy with this new style, and the feel it has. infact i think she right there looks mega hawt! =D dont you? lol. im sure all of you will be seein much more of this brand new style in the future. ^-^

another thing youll see is all the writing! woah terra, wtf happenned?! you exploded with words! lol. well i knew from the start i wanted to start building my chara for the fish vs sword war, so i was trying to motivate myself into that. thus the 'fish! think fishy!' line, lol. all the other stuff on the side, was me just brainstorming ideas and stuff, trying to bring her into reallity. because this piece is unfinished, dont count this as my chara. let me make a finished picture, and ill post up the whole complicated story i have too. =3

and lastly, i didnt submit it under the technical 'wip' section cause i discovered those dont actually show in your updates. =/ and i really really really want you guys to see this and comment. i want huge huge important feedback on this! please! im struggling in a new style, and ANY pointers you have, will be GREATLY appreciated. =3 so please, comment away! ^-^