KH: DoH - Chapter One [In Progress]

by CrazyNekoRun

in Works in Progress

KH: DoH - Chapter One [In Progress]

"Never, again..." Tanitin groaned, plopping himself down in a wooden chair. He and Razen were lucky to get a table at the café. It was packed, as usual. A flame appeared on the candle on the table, lighting up the area a bit more. He was amazed by this simple magic, which they could easily thank the great Merlin for. It was easier than electricity or relighting the candle.

"Here%u2019s our milkshakes," Razen said as he put the glasses down. He sat himself in the chair across from him. The two of them leaned over and sipped quietly from their straws. Finally, Razen licked his lips before speaking again,

"I managed to get some information on the guy."

This snapped Tanitin out of whatever thoughts he was lost in. He turned to look at the mage. He was surprised, but he was smiling. "Really?"

Razen would nod, before continuing on, "Yeah, a few people seemed to have seen him already, here at Traverse. They say he looks like something straight out of some horror movie." He noticed the concern on Tanitin%u2019s face, so he added on, "He doesn%u2019t seem to be sided with the Heartless. They say he shot a few Shadows and Soldiers."

Tanitin sighed in relief. "Good," he replied, "I don%u2019t want to fight any guy with a gun.%u201D He stood up. "If he%u2019s not sided with the Heartless, then we shouldn%u2019t worry about it."

"Hey!" Razen started to get up. "Where are you going? I%u2019m not paying the bill again!"

"Chill out. I%u2019m just heading to the bathroom."

"Oh."

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Aug 17th 2006
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In Progress version of the first chapter of my Pre-Kingdom Hearts doujinshi (Defenders fo Heart) in a book/story form. Also posted as Friends Only in my LiveJournal. Tanitin and Razen belong to me, and Kingdom Hearts belongs to SquareEnix and Disney.

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Dark Velox Says:

cool, but there are random numbers after tantin says "he"
"If he%u2019s