Prologue (part three of three) --> Bloodlust

by rosie rose rose

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Prologue (part three of three) --> Bloodlust

Sam thought he heard something over the music, but thought it must just be his imagination and chose to disregard it. The noise was that of Milk seeing the one she had thought to be her true love standing before her despite the fact that the last time she saw him he had been standing directly in front of an incomming train. "Milk, please don't scream. Please be quiet. Please, shut up. Mi--" Anne had walked up behind Milk and clapped her hands over her mouth.

"You know, for an older brother, you sure are ignorant as to how to do things. She won't listen to you, she's histerical. What we need to do is to slap her scross the face or something so as soon as I let go, will you do that?" Felix nodded. Annne let go and he hesitated before slaping her. She stopped screaming and for about a second she just sat there blankly before she started running for the door.
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The third part of the prologue to the story... god, this thing is gonna be long...

PLEASE comment, I need lots of help because... well, frankly I suck at writing and need someone to tell me how to write well.

Before you read this be sure to read part two:
http://www.sheezyart.com/view/869601/

Comments

Hernandez Says:

WOW! Long prologue! I can't wait for the next one!!!!!!!!!!!!! (I'll edit this one later, I have to go do math.) When you're done writing this story and when I'm done writing mine we should have all the characters meet each other!

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