.:The Frist Time:.

by datstar Beyblade

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.:The Frist Time:.

He staired at her. And he was blushing.
He ran home and told his mother he was in love.

His mother said, "Sweetie, your just to young to even understand the word and I don't think your in it at all."

But it's the first time he fell in love.
But it's his first crush.

The next day at the school playgraound, he ask her out. She said yes.

Deep down in her heart she didn't want him. But she said yes because she didn't know what esle to say.

After the date, she 'requested' for another. And he said "Why not?"

Many years past and they were still dating.
The boy told his mother he was in love.

His mother said, "Sweetie, you're still to young to even understand and know what it means."

But this was his first love.
But this was his first lover.
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Aug 3rd 2006
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This is an old piace of writing. I wrote it when it was the first week when we were dating... And I wonder... is this how he felt when he saw me?

art(c)CCLLIICCKK!!
writing(c)me

Comments

Jenny 4 Says:

I love it!

kazehana56 Says:

Aww. I like this. It's very simple and to the emotion. Absolutely sweet.

shortiiLinda Says:

Me fave, me love

Wynterstoops Says:

It's good, but the ending leaves you hanging. I was expecting more...

xSiko Says:

very touching, i love it :]

Suruka Says:

This is really amazing. And the art is really amazing!

Pipkin Says:

Wowo!!!!Awsome!!!

I really must FAv

Grape juice Says:

This was very cute and i can semi-relate to it! great job

cheese Says:

interesting and very good

ToPzY TuRvY TwIsT Says:

i like that...