How i wish i could tell you

In the sould of my being
In the middle of my heart
I feel this warmth
I feel this love for you
I know you don't love me
I hear it everyday i see it everyday
I can't help but love you
You are perfect
You make me laugh so much
You care so deeply
You make me smile like i have not done in so long
I wish i could tell you
How much i care for you
How much i feel for you
I wish i could tell you how much i....
I want to make you laugh too
I want to make you smile
I want you to feel like everything is ok
Everytime i talk with you i cry
Everytime i hear your voice i smile as tears fall down my cheaks
I never want you to see my tears
Or feel my pain
I wish i would tell you hoe much you make me laugh
I wish i could tell you how much you make me smile
I wish i could tell you that...
I Love You

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Jul 30th 2006

Tags:: love lyric romance
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This is written about someone i love more then anything but can't tell them.

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Featured by Prismind

Nov 21st 2006

This poem holds so much emotion in it. I can look inside myself and remember the times when similar words flowed in my mind.

Comments

Sun and moon Says:

very sad dear i like it

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Deathfire666 Says:

Nicely done and I can relate to that. Just a few words mispelled though. Like "soul" and cheeks."

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Phaena Says:

Awww it reminds me a actor named William Moseley sorta, dunno why. Maybe 'cause I like him lol. Lovely dear, though edit those sneaky typo bastards!

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WH Angel Says:

Other than a few speeling errors, this is absolutely wonderful.

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vampirella666 Says:

Lovely piece. Lots of emotion in it. Me likes.

~Rayne

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Lady Marmelade Says:

Oh my god-I know just to good about your feelings!!!
You couldt say it better with words.......it s great!!!

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Fitos Says:

This is an absolutely lovely poem, but I do have some suggestions: "I know you don't love me, I hear it everyday." That would in my opinion be better, also ""you make me laugh and smile like I have never done before" and "I want to make you laugh, smile and feel secure"..." I never want you to see my tears Or feel my pain. COULD BE --> I want to hide my tears and pain".

NOTE: I am not that could with poems, but give it some thought anyhow

I really like the poem... If you look at mine, you will see that the only good one I have is Death... The rest are bad... THIS ONE IS GOOD!!

Keep up the work and hope you two have a good life