No Longer Human

by Majic510

in Completed Works

No Longer Human

No Longer Human
7-8-06

Wrinkled skin from arms to the face
Right hand severed and as small as a child
I can't imagine if I were in your place
If I were you, would I be able to smile?

No hair on your head
And your nose is gone
Skin mutated and stretched
I can't tell if you%u2019re nine or sixty-one

But nobody seems to hear
And nobody seems to care
They look up with fear
And all they seem to do is stare

If you could talk to me
What would you have to share?
If you could walk with me
Could you take me where
All the emotions have been kept
And the stories I know, have made you wept

Looking at you
You feel no longer human
Looking at you too
I give you my hand

But nobody seems to hear
And nobody seems to care
They look up with fear
And all they seem to do is stare

Looking at you
You feel no longer human
Looking at you too
I give you my hand

And I'll take you to
Where fathers beat their children
Like fucked up fools
And others kill their brothers
So they can get all their money from the dead

But nobody seems to hear
And nobody seems to care
They look up with fear
And all they seem to do is stare

These people may
Look human like me
But if you take their skin away
They cannot bleed

But you are warm and not cold
Underneath your skin
And just to let you know
You are human within

Because underneath your skin
You have a heart and soul
And let me say my friend
You are one of our own
> 'Teh Kepper! ' by Majic510

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Jul 10th 2006
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I saw this woman or child when I was at the forensics camp. Appaently there were other camps going on. Anyways, the girl pretty much looked like this kid, except her right hand was gone and her face was distorted. She strucked me so strongly, I can't get her out of my head. I got home and wrote this lyric for her and tried to figure out what she had over the internet. To the best of my ideas, I believe she's a young girl who was burned in a fire. Little girl, this lyric is for you. May you live a happier life in the future

Pic: http://www.comcen.com.au/~didierm/Update/Journal22.htm

Comments

Mel P Says:

awweee ;_________; that's so sweet T^T I hope she sees this and you it brings comfort.

phantom7 Says:

It is sad when things liek this happen to undeservign people. But thanks to you, there are more people who care.

Kazetsubaki Mitsu Says:

That was really beautiful. I haven't read anything that meaningful in a long time; there's a ton of emotion in it and it really shows.
The girl sounds like she really deserves something as well-done as this about her.

JadedEmeralde Says:

thats so sad. but really beautiful. Oh you might want to fix the I'm guessing suppose to be apastophe for 'you're' on the second stanza fourth line.

Toast Almighty Says:

I have to fav this because it's amazing and it sends shivers up my spine. It's beautiful.

Lady Chimera Says:

this is as beautiful as she is on the inside...it's sad this world of ours*sighs*...

pez Says:

That was.. So upsetting.. But god, I wish so many more people thought like you. It's a wonderful peice, you did excellent.

ShroomArt Says:

this is the kid:

josif Says:

poor kid

Warrior Princess Says:

That was powerful