+This "Walk"

by l0v3

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+This "Walk"

This 'walk' in the woods with my friend was very...very odd.
He would slowly walk and gaze up into the sky.
I try to ask him questions but he wouldn't let me talk.
When we got to this... this lake; bright flowers, clear waters and nice view, he started to talk.
Saying, "I want to share more with you."...
My heart skipped, "I want to, too... But how?" I ask...
He wraped his arm around me, his face got close to mine.
"Love me forever." He said, I wanted to faint.
"Love me like you love your family that I want to be apart of."
I pulled myself away, "That would be lovely!" I said when I sat.
He sat next to me, and he softly touched my cheek.
"Kiss me." he said... and so I did.

This 'walk' I want on was not even one. It was a ride. A ride through love...

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Jul 10th 2006
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couplet human nature nature walk
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A lot had to be edited in this writing...

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Comments

Red Ace Says:

Ah yes, everyone would have that kind of feeling when someone confesses like that, I should know, Im a passionate guy and love to get people together love this fav

datstar Beyblade Says:

WTF? Yes, your welcome on editing and posting it on DA... It wasn't a big hit ya know?

shortiiLinda Says:

What said!!