Broken (Poetry)

by huolong

in Completed Works

< 'Frenchy' by huolong

Broken (Poetry)

I've become what I hated the most
I changed to fit in, to make myself happy
But why do I still feel this emptiness,
This sense of bitterness that wont go away
The void wont fill
I cant go back
I'm loosing control of my life
> 'Feel the burn' by huolong

Description

I'm going through a rough patch at the moment. I need to polish this off, but it's just what came out. I wish I was slightly more fluent with this....

Comments

Minstrel Ayreon Says:

I'm sorry to see that things haven't gone well for you and that someone has hurt you this way.

I Am Alive Says:

I know what you mean. I always see people who just want to please everyone and pretend that they are who they want to be and i loathe them....and then i look at myself and i'm like....shiiiiiit i'm just like them.....DAMNED AND I WAS IN SUCH A GOOD MOOD....*angst angst angst* lol