naruto - 10k fists

by WHLoneHawk

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Mature Jun 21st 2006
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anime disturbed naruto text
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MATURE!!!! STRONG LYRICS!!!!

Naruto - Masashi Kishimoto
Ten Thousand Fists - Disturbed
Walpaper - WHLoneHawk

Narutos worst but best tech...was used for this one. the Kage Bunshin no Jutsu.

i like the song...it seems to fit him, but i could be wrong.

Comments

WH Angel Says:

Ok, time for my critique. I know you want it.

First off, the wall seems busy. Pick one image or trait of Naruto to feature and revolve the wall around that. Don't use too many images either, though.

Second, the words need to be outlived because they blend into the background too much. Try doing a stroke in either black or white, since you used red for the words.

Third, where it says chorus, you need to actually put in the chorus. The word just takes away from the rest of it.

Otherwise, this is a good wall. Keep up the awesome work!

Rapture HalfaFoxgirl Says:

I love Disturbed