I think the composition is really nice (the triangle's generally a good shape to place things in; it keeps your eyes moving from one object to the next), but I think it's really too focused around the center. It's generally a habit to keep whole-objects 100% in site, etc., but maybe you should crop it (next time, or try it out and see what it looks like with this one) so the whole scene isn't showing. If you do that, things (like I said) generally rotate alot around the center. The actual art is pretty good, and I've always loved the colours you choose. Eee.
I really love it AS IS. The thing I really like about your artwork, is it never ever feels cluttered, even with the most minute details you add, the whole thing still feels gorgeous and spacious. I really feel like you set an environment and tell a beautiful story! If only you could be the sand woman who creates my dreams, I would never want to wake!
Enjoy!
Comments
Anieko Says:
Really Cute luv the colors!
Cat Megex Says:
I like the detail on the building. ^^
Gobeur Says:
-gawk- This came out so beautifully... *^*
PakMan Says:
So awesome, love the background!
LAEluu Says:
I think the composition is really nice (the triangle's generally a good shape to place things in; it keeps your eyes moving from one object to the next), but I think it's really too focused around the center. It's generally a habit to keep whole-objects 100% in site, etc., but maybe you should crop it (next time, or try it out and see what it looks like with this one) so the whole scene isn't showing. If you do that, things (like I said) generally rotate alot around the center. The actual art is pretty good, and I've always loved the colours you choose.
Eee.
shiratori Says:
Looks so soft , like a dream! i like it x3!
Sonaa Says:
I really love it AS IS. The thing I really like about your artwork, is it never ever feels cluttered, even with the most minute details you add, the whole thing still feels gorgeous and spacious. I really feel like you set an environment and tell a beautiful story! If only you could be the sand woman who creates my dreams, I would never want to wake!
Shifty T Says:
LOVELY PICTURE!
It has a very dreamy-like appearence!
DarkFairy Says:
so cool
Izaberu Says:
wow, it's so amazing!!!! I really like the colors, I wish I could color my drawing like that ^^ It's soooo nice!!!