Icer Dragoon Horror

Ooooookays. So there IS a reason behind my silly name. I've been trying to make a story with a character named Icer Dragoon but I've been trying to see if he should be horror or shonen. I might do both. Sorta like alternate storylines (like how tenchi muyo is done) well, anyways, here's my horror version of Icer Dragoon. Methinks I might submit my shonen version later. Oh, well! Tell me what ya'll think!