I Bid You Adieu

by reapersfable

in Completed Works

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I Bid You Adieu

The skin begins to grow,
And the dusk begins to twist,
The nuns begin to pray,
And God creates his list.

We are all with the Devil,
Living in his own domain.
As the ceiling falls upon the darkened Hell,
Angels scream and tear their wings far from their shells.
Human beings watch from where they stand on Earth,
Knowing just below the surface, the Devil is perched.

Dreaming in a tree, watching as it burns,
The people come out to watch this silent plead.
Don%u2019t forget the moment when he said to you,
%u201CI am all that remains, and I will love you too.%u201D

Perhaps he was right, or perhaps he was wrong.
Now the people strive to stay strong.
With one last breath, I answered back,
%u201CYes sir, I know what this world lacks.%u201D
It%u2019s love, it%u2019s hope, it%u2019s all that can%u2019t remain.
And with this last remaining strand of this world,
It will continuing it%u2019s suffering pain.
> 'Managed to Doodle :3' by reapersfable

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May 26th 2006
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adieu bid dark and horror general human nature i lyric narrative poetry society spiritual you youth
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I hate this world.
>___< Only for it's corruption.

And no, I didn't capitize HE as in God, because I don't believe in him. Don't barge at me for that.

Comments

Decay Says:

dude
this is like.. the best ever.
i really love teh first part but the overall thing is very powerful

BUT YOULL NEVER GET TEH FRONT PAGE WITHOUT SLITTIN UR WRISTZ LOLOLZOLZLZOZLZ *shot*

Chibi Cocoa Chan Says:

I really enjoy this. I'm going to have to go back and read some more of your writing ^^

Its true that this world is corrupted, thats why I can't wait to leave it.

Besides, all that, I really enjoyed reading this ^^

Doctor Dolittle Says:

You're a very good poet.
It seems you know what you're doing.

marthaISmad Says:

you got skills... *bows*

this is a fav! ^^

ZiggyBuggy Says:

Very very nice, mah friend!

I like it alot! Like Emma said, it's very powerful!

Luxord Says:

Wow, that was beautiful. I hardly ever get touched by poems, but this did. fav
This world is so messed up.

Heh, I don't believe in god either. My father screwed it up for me. o.o