When you die we will look above and watch your shadow in the sky
Remembering those days we used to cry
From the pain you caused and the joy in our eyes
Forever you remain in this once true lie
I do not mind I do not mind
For you have already forgotten this time
Forgotten i have already excepted the goodbyes
Remembering those days we both lived
The simple and easy things to forgive
i wrote this when my friend said he was going to die. So i wrote it for him now i will forever remember him the way he was. And now hes not here. Enjoy
Um... the whole thing about when he said he was going to die was a joke but I said this poem on the top of my head and it was funny and he looked at me suprised.
Comments
Fluer Says:
Oh Wow... that is so amazing, nice job!
Pixie Wildflower Says:
Very beautiful. Bittersweet.
Sydia Says:
very beautiful...also if is a sad thing lose someone important for us..
Red wolfen Says:
did he really die? if so im sorry...
malice676767 Says:
Um... the whole thing about when he said he was going to die was a joke but I said this poem on the top of my head and it was funny and he looked at me suprised.
tweetybird11 Says:
well that was a nice job wish i could write like that and just make up anything well i think you did a wonderful job
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toolshed11 Says:
did u mean to say "accepted" instead of "excepted"? its would seema little awkward to me to put "excepted" where it is. but either way its beautiful
Nightowl10175 Says:
did i not comment on the greatest poem with the name Adam ever made?
Nightowl10175 Says:
Sorry, it is good, but I might like more for personal reasons...bad Valerie!