at 1st I thought you were about to show us a cg image of a realism art 0__o...
I think your realism skills are fine, better than mines...
though I can't draw realims, I know the basic.
The eyes are right, though many times,
ppl may say that; that look abit anime,
but it's not really, !
because your making her eyes/iris shine/gleam.
woot hoo for sexy --- super model!
The only things I see wrong is your neck, unlike cartoons,
realistic necks are from check to check,
as in, don't give her a skinny neck.
us humans neck starts from the back of our ears,
and for the shoulders, they are the same lenght of your neck,
don't be scared of the paper portion, measure the neck and from where
you left the neck off, drop a tilt line then hit a straight line down.
but overall her lips are WONDERFULL!!! and eyes, hair... everything ^^!!
now to make a effcient shade next time you do decide to draw realism... 0__9!
any tips on how i can improve?
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Protogirl Says:
at 1st I thought you were about to show us a cg image of a realism art 0__o...
!
I think your realism skills are fine, better than mines...
though I can't draw realims, I know the basic.
The eyes are right, though many times,
ppl may say that; that look abit anime,
but it's not really,
because your making her eyes/iris shine/gleam.
woot hoo for sexy --- super model!
The only things I see wrong is your neck, unlike cartoons,
realistic necks are from check to check,
as in, don't give her a skinny neck.
us humans neck starts from the back of our ears,
and for the shoulders, they are the same lenght of your neck,
don't be scared of the paper portion, measure the neck and from where
you left the neck off, drop a tilt line then hit a straight line down.
but overall her lips are WONDERFULL!!! and eyes, hair... everything ^^!!
now to make a effcient shade next time you do decide to draw realism... 0__9!
Moosecream Says:
that's really wonderful! the lips are perfect!
HYB Says:
that looks really good,just as feminine as kazu-chan looks
rawr,i wouldn' mind bumping to him in the street...the lips and eyes are lookin fine 
Away From Sanity Says:
Actually, that's really awesome looking. Wow. *thumbs up for you*