;;rain;;

by Bandy

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;;rain;;

I love rain:
Sweet teardrops,
Magic sound,
So cold.
Blue whisper,
tonight.
Near a dream:
Sleep...
> '... Meow. <3' by Bandy

Description

May 22nd 2006
Tags:
happy nature rain
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397
Comments:
6
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1
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A small lill thing I slapped together for english class...

I wrote the poem but I did not draw the picture. It's from
http://images.quizilla.com/S/SA/SAP/SapphireRain41/1135794818_HappyRain2.JPG

Edit: THANKYOU ALL SO MUCH FOR THE FAVS. OMG. YAY FRONT PAGE.

Comments

A Far Off Dream Says:

awwwwwwww I like it

GothIQa Says:

Pretty good

binflaggle Says:

That's lovely! I really like the poem... It's so simple but really effective.

laughing warlock Says:

I like rain. It makes the air smell nice.

Danimeexo Says:

Rain, Rain, Come Back, I really wish to play again. <-- Wow I suck at that. LOL. But good Poem, I like the picture. Even if you didn't draw it. If you did though, I
would of been like: o_O *worship*

LOL.

Anyways, I love it. Good Job.

-Danime

Keldorix Says:

Short sweet and to the point... i like it.
at any rate it is a beutiful poem, i fell in love with your words.