Transparent

by wickedorin

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Description

Date: May 21, 2006
Genre: it's but a dream...

It was late at night and I was very tired. But I'm very happy with the results, so maybe I should use Fruity Loops when I'm about to fall asleep more often.

- music copyright 2006, Orin Drake

Comments

nathey Says:

Add a few more bells n whistles and it will sound like an enya track good work!

Charleon Says:

yeah, this is a very good arrangement, though it gets a little bit repetative.. you should try to enhance the trombone(?) lead.. as it only can be heard in the background through the whole song, you need it to come through a little bit and compete with the main comp also this is one of the few songs i've heard that sounds best without percussion.. keep up the good work.. i will watch you

KaiVixen Says:

Whoa...totally sounds "transparent"...you can tell that you put a lot of feeling into this. It's beautiful! Keep up the great work, I love listening to all of your music! ^o^

DarKsidE Says:

Good work but a little simple in the end AND I can hear your loopcuts. You should add a little more variety as this tune stands for a "dream". Some chorus and bells should do the job, well you choose in the end.

Keep it up! :)