"My...."

My lightening will appear above your head
But you may be in bed
My thunder is to wake you up
But it's still not loud enough
My hail stone rain should make you cry
But I guess it just made you sigh
My powerful sun should make you smile
And you get up in a short while
You smile at me
"Thank you, now please let me be."

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May 11th 2006
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This is just a funny little poem thing that i wrote in English. Nothing much... Luis was watching me write it. ^^

I got the picture here:

http://images.quizilla.com/S/SA/SAP/SapphireRain41/1135794818_HappyRain2.JPG

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Inochi Yakusoku Says:

wow youve gotten better o.o i like this

Key of Kingdoms Says:

ha ha ha! i love that one,I should put that one I wrote on hear (LOL) p.s.im the blue guy and your the green guy (LOL)

nesuke Says:

>=) she is perfect!!!! >=)

forcedexistence Says:

awww, that's kinda cute!!! ^_____^