"When a Loved One Falls"

by Indigo Mood Swing

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"When a Loved One Falls"

When a loved one falls
You must go down sorrowful halls
To protect her and keep her safe
You may feel a sudden panic and you may cry
But you must keep her safe or she will surely die
You help her out of that dark cave
You are extremly brave
I would have cried and fainted
But you didn't leave her in the dark
You brought her to a tranquil park
Where she can sing and laugh again
You know she will win
Without you by her side
She could have died
Be Brave Forever,
I Believe In You

-Indigo Mood Swing
> 'chihaya' by Indigo Mood Swing

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May 5th 2006
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human nature poetry
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This poem is for one of my best friends, Luis (Key of Kingdoms). Something happened the other day and I wanted him to know how brave he was about it and that everything is all right. So, I wrote this poem for him. Hope you like it Luis! I tried!

I got this picture from this link... http://www15.oekakibbs.com/bbs/Rekenairal/data/145.png

Comments

Inochi Yakusoku Says:

thats really pretty

Xemnas Says:

friends is meaningful, to abd we nobodies need them ! lol. jk

LaurynTheHylian Says:

Very nice.

Hiroki Prowl Says:

Awwww...that's such a sweet pic, and such a beautiful poem too have a Bunny Rabbit!
(\_/)
(^ ^)
(___)o

forcedexistence Says:

awwwwwww...... how sweet.... such a kind girl who would write something like this...