Slave of Love

by HMC

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Slave of Love

Slave of love

Why do i hurt while I'm in love
Why do i love when I'm hurt
why am i here if i cause pain
I've lost control of my life
and now I'm just being dragged
on the ground of hell and it hurts
my heart has been punctured
my lungs full of tears
i am breathing sadness
I'm drowning inside myself
i am dieing because of love
i do not joke, i do not lie
if you don t believe me
I should die.
> Tired

Description

May 4th 2006
Tags:
experimental free verse general love lyric romance slave
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i was really depressed at the time... piss off

Comments

Madam Shoebox Says:

D: It's really good, but sad..

shyboy Says:

emo

teknoa Says:

Well maybe a tad 'emo' but thats not always a 'bad' thing. I like the rhyming couplets at the end, gave it a kind of nursery rhyme / children's prayer vibe to it.