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"My Sacrifice"
Why do you fear me?
I'm as harmless as a bee
I'm only offering my eternal Love
So you and I can soar above
I would never hurt your frail skin
Even with a gentle pin
I may sting and hurt your smile
But only for a short while
True, you may be the Sacrifice
But your still as delicuit as a grain of rice
With my power, I will protect you
Now you know what is really true
Eskedio
-Indigo Mood Swing
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Comments
Inochi Yakusoku Says:
thats sweet!
Kaiya Sumeragi Says:
U really captured Soubi's thoughts!
Haha!
Soubi: How did u get in there?
Ritsuka: Ur talking to urself again. STOP COMMING THROUGH MY WINDOW
*faves*
alu Says:
; w; I liked the first few lines.
Loveless makes alu cry alot. ):
WhiteFoxDK Says:
I like the song with the same title ^^
Key of Kingdoms Says:
your the best
SpiritKitsune Says:
Everything about this is adorable!
Chimyra Says:
I love it, you are very talented ^^ I have no skill whatsoever when it comes to rhymes.

But ah, "delicuit" is spelt delicate x3
hypergirl8807 Says:
It's so sweet. I envy you, I can't do good poems like that. Very nice ^^
forcedexistence Says:
how kindly done... beautiful writing, trully....
SMA Sword Says:
that was really nice, u must have put alot of thought into it, really sweet