"My Sacrifice"

by Indigo Mood Swing

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< 'chihaya' by Indigo Mood Swing

"My Sacrifice"


Why do you fear me?
I'm as harmless as a bee
I'm only offering my eternal Love
So you and I can soar above
I would never hurt your frail skin
Even with a gentle pin
I may sting and hurt your smile
But only for a short while
True, you may be the Sacrifice
But your still as delicuit as a grain of rice
With my power, I will protect you
Now you know what is really true
Eskedio

-Indigo Mood Swing
> 'Marris again' by Indigo Mood Swing

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Apr 26th 2006
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poetry romance
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I wrote this about Loveless, this is like Soubi talking to Ritsuka... :)

Picture: Featured in Eps. 3, I think

YAY!! Its on Community Picks!!!

Comments

Inochi Yakusoku Says:

thats sweet!

Kaiya Sumeragi Says:

U really captured Soubi's thoughts!

Soubi: How did u get in there?
Ritsuka: Ur talking to urself again. STOP COMMING THROUGH MY WINDOW

Haha!

*faves*

alu Says:

; w; I liked the first few lines.

Loveless makes alu cry alot. ):

WhiteFoxDK Says:

I like the song with the same title ^^

Key of Kingdoms Says:

your the best

SpiritKitsune Says:

Everything about this is adorable!

Chimyra Says:

I love it, you are very talented ^^ I have no skill whatsoever when it comes to rhymes.
But ah, "delicuit" is spelt delicate x3

hypergirl8807 Says:

It's so sweet. I envy you, I can't do good poems like that. Very nice ^^

forcedexistence Says:

how kindly done... beautiful writing, trully....

SMA Sword Says:

that was really nice, u must have put alot of thought into it, really sweet