Forgot about posting yesterday. I've been realy sick, and I've also noticed no one has been commenting on my stuff as of late. I guess I lost my kick a while ago. Oh well. I guess I am not trying hard enough and just got nothing left or I'm posting to often. Oh well. This song is far from being my best, I half-assed this one hard. I was playing around and trying to come up with something and so this came out. It's very repetitive and doesn't exactly seem to sound as though it changes all to much. Any comments would be apprciated, but like I said, I know this isn't my best work.
.Dreamer.
Comments
Gilliam Himself Says:
Well I think it's pretty cool. I love the way it gradually introduces all the riffs in the beggining, but you're right. It doesn't sound like it changes a lot. At about four minutes in it changes more than it does at any other point in the track. Maybe you should bring it forward a bit so it comes in earilier? It needs more change and things.
Saying that, though... It's really trancy. The trumpet sounding genorator's a bit wierd, but it's kinda cool at the same time. So I'll fav it
LAEluu Says:
Homg, I comment! ;o; ::Waves arms.:: But so far, the beginning's pretty cool....Yeah, it sounds less like listening music and more like video-game music to me.
Darling, don't worry about updating ever week! Just update when you make music. 
S'what I do with art!
stylisedstar Says:
Sorry for the lack of comments
). I think some spacey pads in there somewhere would really fill out the sound though. And also, there are a lot of repeats of the main melody bit (riff?), which get kinda boring after a while.
I love the way the different instruments blend together, they all have great melodies and make a great rhythm together (and rhythm is my favourite element of music
Still, I like the sound going on here. Keep it up
Charleon Says:
I think the build-up is far too long for this kinda music; even the facts that the sounds keep building onto eachother doesn't give you a feeling that the song is ever "starting". I guess i can't explain it pretty well, but the song doesn't have a stylized climax and even less variety. It's pretty okay for a short Loop though. I think the main concern you should work with is spiffing ypur tunes with a variety of melodies, drum breakbeats, and experiment As i hear you already know how to make good tunes, just pack more of the "good tunes" into the songs you make =)
blackness Says:
Wow I really like this! FAV!