Hell's Attraction: new beginning

the first chapter of the story was good but a couple of things went wrong, first was that i plan for my boyfriend's character to be Natasha's bf or brother but we had a little fight but beginning of this year, me and James got back together and it's been so wonderful for the both of us^^ i feel so happy and love by my baby blue that i feel like the happiness girl alive^^ this cover has Natasha as she is now and i changed her outfit a little bit sorry about that, with Dark Ryo in the background holding Natasha like she is a spirte ball in his hands..i was going to have chains around her but by that time, the outfit and pose was already made so it was pretty much too late, i'll do that next time if i remember.