?????????

you are there
i am here

i see you there
with that girl....
that girl in black

i herd her say she loved you
even though you said it back
you say you were just playing
you say it was just a joke but....

but....

i saw you kiss her
not just a peck
a love filled kiss....

i feel like my world has come to its end
end and gone down....down deep under

i can't belive it
i won't belive it
but....
my heart knows its true

so....

i'm sorry....
sorry she likes you
sorry you like her
sorry i loved you
sorry i belived you
sorry....
sorry....
sorry....


ITS OVER!

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Apr 15th 2006
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dark and horror
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Help me come up with a name for this plz!!!

Comments

Fennic Says:

Why don't you try the title "Broken"

BracingHope Says:

its awsum......call it "Sorry"

KiroGTZ Says:

Very nice poem,hmm as for a name,i think the previos 2 that were sudjested are good,and apropriet for the poem,good job ^-^

forcedexistence Says:

hmmm...for a title...how about... something like... "I Saw..." I dunno, it sounded like it would fit. ^^ very nice, so filled with emotion!