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you are there
i am here
i see you there
with that girl....
that girl in black
i herd her say she loved you
even though you said it back
you say you were just playing
you say it was just a joke but....
but....
i saw you kiss her
not just a peck
a love filled kiss....
i feel like my world has come to its end
end and gone down....down deep under
i can't belive it
i won't belive it
but....
my heart knows its true
so....
i'm sorry....
sorry she likes you
sorry you like her
sorry i loved you
sorry i belived you
sorry....
sorry....
sorry....
ITS OVER!
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Comments
Fennic Says:
Why don't you try the title "Broken"
BracingHope Says:
its awsum......call it "Sorry"
KiroGTZ Says:
Very nice poem,hmm as for a name,i think the previos 2 that were sudjested are good,and apropriet for the poem,good job ^-^
forcedexistence Says:
hmmm...for a title...how about... something like... "I Saw..." I dunno, it sounded like it would fit. ^^ very nice, so filled with emotion!