.:Come With Me:.

by Starshine Harle

in Completed Works

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Apr 12th 2006
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club dance dance house techno
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I forgot it was Weds. for som reason. My mind isn't completly with me today due to the fact that I have a paper due in like 4 hours that's not done. So what happened to my comments on my last submission? That bad I assume? Well anyhow, here is another song for another week. This was a total experiment to see if I could pull off something a little more House and not techno. I think I failed at this one misrably but It was a shot and I took it. Some of the mixture in here could definetly change but I am way to lazy to go back and fix it. Like I said, this was more or less along the lines of an experiment, so if it's bad, can you please tell me where I went wrong so in the future I can fix these things? Thanks a bunch! Enjoy!

.Come With Me.

Comments

LAEluu Says:

Who's voice is this?

PS: Sounds Dance-ish to me; not house. Nnn. I like it. It's pretty. :ances and shakes 'er booty.::

Charleon Says:

well, i think: to make it sound more like house you need three things:
1. More bass, the bass is almost nonexistant in the song,
2. More alternative percussion, you loop the same one over and over
3. evolve the song: you start off in a good way, but the song just don't get anywhere from the start, if you understand me? =)
It isn't bad as it is, i listened to it a couple of times, it's just not something you boot up many times in a row on your mp3player, mainly cause of point nr 3 , anyways it's a good start to what you wanted to accomplish