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Everlasting Heartbeat
You took my hand...
and touched my heart...
even though we might...
forever be apart.
You kissed my face...
opened my eyes...
and I think...
you just claimed my life!
This love so deep!
Love so strong!
We'll take the path...
less often trod...
Oh God,
please let these feelings last.
I was lost...
so alone...
In my mind...
I've finally found a home.
We can't turn back!
We must hold on!
How can they say...
our hearts are so wrong?
I know this thumping...
is love so gentle...
Love so perfect...
Love so deep.
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Comments
AngelMint Says:
Awwwwww....
Celiseyah Says:
i wrote the music to this song and it's sitting on the desk right beside me...took me a few hours and 1 or 2 do-overs, but I got it done and it sounds almost exactly as I envisioned...now I just have to change it to vocals and add the words to the music and IT IS COMPLETE!!! MWAHAHAHAA!!!! ...but then I have to write the music for the duet on here and that is gonna be a pain cuz I'm writin soprano, tenor, and maybe a few instrument parts for it... *slaps myself in the face and shakes my head, wondering WHAT THE CRAP i'm thinkin*...lol
SailorMoon Says:
Very very nice poem.
Love~~ 
Wow, you're writing all the scores for those? You're really talented! Too bad you can't post music on Sheezy... Post a link if you ever record it~ ^^
Celiseyah Says:
well, I wrote the soprano part for this one...
Bluedestiny Says:
wow that is very good...i could never do anything like this T__T