I like this one the most.. Really good poem really.. And so true..
This is a really good poem. ^^ It's even better because it is how people tend to act towards those who can do things they can't.
that's cool and toching and i like the pic
It's a sad poem, and unfortunately, holds true for many people, although I'm glad to say that I have never been the shooter or the shootee...is shootee even a word?
Wow I really love this poem, its very touching and deep. It really moves you in the heart, keep up the good work ^-^
*gasp* its beautifullerEST thing evaaar!
Wow, that's deep (and angsty). I especially liked the last stanza.
wow, your so right, moust ppl do that, its a terrible part of the human race, oh well maybe some day that will change, good poem^-^.
it's a little cliche oO;...and you say birdie and fly too much, you shoudl try gettin in some other words that rhyme, but the idea isn't bad
Lot of angst... and so true. Humans are such a flawed race...
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Mewzero Says:
I like this one the most..
Really good poem really..
And so true..
BlackAries Says:
This is a really good poem. ^^ It's even better because it is how people tend to act towards those who can do things they can't.
degee43t4gt Says:
that's cool and toching and i like the pic
Cat Megex Says:
It's a sad poem, and unfortunately, holds true for many people, although I'm glad to say that I have never been the shooter or the shootee...is shootee even a word?
TohruHonda2467 Says:
Wow I really love this poem, its very touching and deep. It really moves you in the heart, keep up the good work ^-^
Blondette the wolf Says:
*gasp* its beautifullerEST thing evaaar!
videogamerx Says:
Wow, that's deep (and angsty). I especially liked the last stanza.
KiroGTZ Says:
wow, your so right, moust ppl do that, its a terrible part of the human race, oh well maybe some day that will change, good poem^-^.
AlekHiwatari Says:
it's a little cliche oO;...and you say birdie and fly too much, you shoudl try gettin in some other words that rhyme, but the idea isn't bad
Chea Yai the Werecat Says:
Lot of angst... and so true. Humans are such a flawed race...