The me in the mirror

by Animayqueen

in Completed Works

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The me in the mirror

The me in the mirror knows what to say
When you yell and scream and treat me that way
But I don't

The me in the mirror can stand up for herself
She can take her fear and hides it on a shelf
But I can't

The me in the mirror can be the light of you life
She's as keen and as sharp as the edge of the knife
But I'm not

The me in the mirror will comfort you
Whenever you are feeling blue
But I won%u2019t

The me in the mirror is as perfect as can be
All she ever does is try to please
But I don't

The me in the mirror looks just like me
And everyday I strive to achieve
To become the me in the mirror that I know I can be

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Feb 28th 2006
Tags:
human nature in me mirror philosophical
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A short poem I wrote. I actually tried to rhyme for once. Tell me if that turned out okay!

Comments

Chibi Kitty Chan Says:

ooooh, pretty o.o

Doctor Dolittle Says:

It is awesome, actually.
I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it, too.

laz89 Says:

ooh nice

SilverChakra Says:

This is beautiful...it's really lovely! And I lvoe the image for the ppoem aswell, I've seen it before somewhere. Gotta fave this lovely poem

KGAM4342 Says:

=D I like it!!!!! Awesomeish. FAVED

Sanchu Says:

I adore your poem!! It was beautiful and magnificent!!! So lovely!! It makes me wanna draw!! But I won't cuz that might offend you...;p... Please don't ever stop writing!! You are way talented and really know how to make people feel inspired!!

KiroGTZ Says:

I liked it its realy nice^-^.

witchraft101 Says:

Its beautiful

degee43t4gt Says:

it's sooooo cool!

yvtriga Says:

This is really beautiful...