Lets Get These Teen Hearts Beating Faster Faster

Let's get these teen hearts beating, faster, faster
So testosterone boys and harlequin girls
Will you dance to this beat, and hold a lover close
So testosterone boys and harlequin girls
Will you dance to this beat, and hold a lover close

"Lying Is The Most Fun A Girl Can Have Without Taking Her Clothes Off"- Panic! At The Disco
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ouch my hands. this is as done as this little hoho is gonna get, folks.

No critique please. And if you're going to go ghghghghghghgh WHY DONT YOU ACCEPT CRITICISM? Here's why.
Everything I draw or do is tied to my emotions rather tightly, and when people tell me whats wrong with my pieces, it hurts me pretty bad.... not so much because of an ego-factor, but because its kinda like if someone walked up to a hobo and told him hes failing at life because hes wearing dirty clothes and sitting under a bridge. Just... don't do it. I know what's wrong with all of my pieces and I strive to improve on them all everytime I draw.