Without You I'd Die!!

by james faircloth

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Without You I'd Die!!

the night was dreary as the rain came down. she said"let's fo for a ride away from town" All thro the ride she had nothing to say, it was as if something stood in her way. then suddenly it came out,out of the blue,"my parents said I've got to break up with you." "I'm sorry" she said "I can't pretend, my parents said our love just has to end!" she took off her ring as tears ran from her eyes, at the same time the fear he had of losing her began to rise! With tears threatening to fall, he held them back as he unconsciously parked the car on a railroad track. He wrote something on a piece of paper, he held her hand and said,"read it later." He always wished they would never part, he said in a sad voice "you just broke my heart." She opened the door and walked out in the rain, that's when she saw the lights of a train. Realizing too late what she had sighted, with the blink of an eye metal collided. All she could remember was blood running red, and someone saying "I'm sorry, but he's dead!" The ambulance sounded like an agony cry, then she read the paper and it said "WITHOUT YOU I'D DIE!"
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Feb 8th 2006
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die id lyric philosophical without you
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I wrote this when I felt like this, but I don't feel like this anymore!!
Anyway, I hope you like it!! :) :) :)
I had to think really hard to make the lines rhyme.
It's kinda sad.

Comments

Kilre Says:

how very ironic

Der Sensenmann Says:

It's a tad dramatic, but I dig it.

mohosavich Says:

creepy

Constricted Heart Says:

Totally know where ur coming rom with this......is good writing 2

kyobunny3k Says:

aww that made me cry! you are so good!!

Carabas Says:

Very sad. Ironic though. Love that last line, of course. Great twist at the end and all that. ^^ It could use some formatting maybe, but apart from that I love it.

Reckless Fire Says:

Thats very deep and ironic. xD I love it.