Jayde

Don't cry when you see her cold, lifeless eyes,
The blood she shed is staining your clothes now,
How could you forget to say your goodbye?
Though you watched her die, you can't believe how.

She took the gun and raised it to her head,
You screamed out in pain as she let it go,
Somehow you can't believe that she is dead,
You find yourself hoping it was for show.

Her crimson blood flows passed her sad smile,
Suddenl, you scream out in rage and pain,
Her last words were, "I'm glad you stayed awhile."
Your salty tears mix with the darkened rain.

Run - run away from the pain that she made,
You sob then speak the words, "I'm sorry Jayde."

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Feb 6th 2006
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Sonnet I wrote for my English class. There's a triology that goes with this. Tell me if you want to post it.

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Bloodthirst666 Says:

Definatley!!!!that was a masterpeice!!

witchraft101 Says:

full of emotion!!

redrevvy Says:

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!


*blink*

Very nice. *blink* but awkward for me! LOL!

Teknoslasher Says:

Wheres that picture from?

Devo Face Says:

OMG thats even more amazing......