If you have promised me you'll critique my stuff more... make *this* the peice that yo give it to. Mostly I notice her left arm needs reworking, the angle and bicep look a little bizzare. Anything else?
Mace is ? me.
Edit: *cough* I have to say this:
Her ass has been clubbed.
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OleanderVyce Says:
Very nice character concept. In all honesty, I think the only thing that needs work is, as you've mentioned, the left arm. It seems a little short to me. Perhaps extending it further, or angling the forearm differently might help?

Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing the finished version.