The Kiss

by Terralventhe

in Completed Works

The Kiss

Evening's chill is kept at bay
As swept in sleeper's sheets
He lay aslumber, his cares away
And deepest dreams he greets

Not a sound but running river
Cricking crickets perform
Not a chance that he might shiver
For in his rest, he's warm

The slightest rustle of green blades
The tiniest turn of shielding tent
As she enters hidden, within shades
Creeping to an overbearing descent

Staring soft, she watches him
As he lies in slumber deep
Ne'er had she seen such a thing
That she would want to keep

Leaning in, her heart beats fast
Unlike herself, she felt tonight
Though no spell had e'er been cast
She could not forget the sight

Her heart a captive of this man
She leaned closer for a kiss
Over his sleeping lips hers ran
Never had she felt like this

Eyes opened slowly, as he awoke
She sprang back from the elf
Gone was she, before he even spoke
Before he even knew himself

What had occurred this fateful eve?
Was it something much more new?
Something that he could not percieve
An emotion that he had never knew

She sat alone, staring out
Unto the river's run
Her heart full of hope and doubt
Until arose the sun

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Jan 25th 2006
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Just a lil' somethin' I was thinking of last night, lying in bed.. lonely and alone. I got to thinking about Baldur and Shads a bit.. and how they met. Shads had this really nice, lovely idea of how their relationship began to develop at one. So, with that in mind, I give you this latest piece of sappy love poetry.

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Shadette Says:

That was absolutely perfect, baby. Thank you so much. *huggles him tight*

I've tried to come with visuals on how they first met, and you did it perfectly in poem. ^__^

Ongaru Says:

Wow. Usually in stories like this, it's the guy who finds the girl. Having it the other way around was a nice twist. ^^