two sided page 6

by lilymonhai

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Jan 21st 2006
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anime and manga lilymonhai sided two
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=.=''' just finished and well post it blah, i wanna test how people feel about it, personally i think i used too much screentone =_=
umm finished ink last summer o_o;; and i left half month between till i finally colored it ToT tell me what you guys think plz

Comments

Malchitos Says:

i don't...it pretty cool except for a word's spelling....do you have this comic posted?

Seinde Says:

^^ you've improved so much since the last comic pages you posted. I think your choice of tones is excellent

draggles Says:

I really like the tone you chose for his pants.
Good expressions. He looks mildly repulsed. ^^

Cheney Says:

I love the tones *___* how did you made them?
I especially love the shading of the trousers *__*

Ranefea Says:

As far as too much screentone, I think its alright, but one improvement may be making the background a darker, more solid tone. Too much patterned screentones like the ones you used tend to make things a bit confused within the page. But other than that it looks great!!

Rayl Says:

Wow that looks pretty cool ^^ I especially like the hair.