One day I was randomly inspired to write a jazz song.
Singing it accopello, it sounds jazzy. So recently I tried to create the mp3 file, (which can't have voice yet :( ) and THIS is what happened

It's the same song, but the ending is changed DRASTICALLY.
Of course, none of you'd know cuz you've never heard the vocals. But still. After tweaking some dynamics and adding some sucky drums, I like it.
The intro stinks a bit, though.
So, enjoy, and C&C appreciated! (especially on the drums -.-;
Song (c) AshHavynn
Comments
Tikara the Mew Says:
Woah my gaddness....
That is freaking awesome even without vocals... FREAKING. AWESOME.
rion Says:
Lovely! *o* I like when the (guessing on the instruments xD) sax and flute play in tandem and when the piece switches over to focus on the piano around the one minute mark...it's nice and bold sounding especially since it sounds like you lowered the dynamics of the previous section a bit. :3
Saya17Michi17 Says:
Wow. What a great peice. I love the notes and how they fit so well. I'd love to hear it with vocals >///<