Moonlight

by Cylonius

in Completed Works

< 'Blood Brothers' by Cylonius

Moonlight

Sitting in the moonlight,
staring at the stars.
Two lovers share the night tonight,
in eachother's arms.

As they sit, hand-in-hand,
their eyes begin to meet.
As do their lustfull lips,
in a kiss that tastes to sweet.

The young man parts his lips to say,
those words he felt so true.
Leaned over to her ear and whispered,
"Sweetie, I love you."
> 'FRANCE!' by Cylonius

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Jan 17th 2006
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human nature love romance youth
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A short poem dedicated to Yiang.I know its not very long, but i put alot of heart into it. Love ya hun

Yes, i know the stars are crappy!

Update: Wow, front page! Never got that before, thanks everyone!

Comments

Wanker The Gangster Says:

Br1ngz 4 t34r 2 m4 3y3 d4wg, g00d w0rk!

Ladada2001 Says:

Parody:

Shitting in the moonlight,
staring at the stars.
Two lovers share the night tonight,
in eachother's cars.

As they shit, in-hand,
their thighs begin to meet.
As do their lustfull hips,
in a kiss that tastes like feet.

The young man parts his hips to say,
Hunny I feel so gay.

extended:

And there they sit,
same as ever,
he took a dump,
she pulled the lever,

their toilet cloged,
and water flowed,
look out world,
it's their mother lode!

Marc69 Says:

That's really cute actually! "awwwww kyle and yvette in a tree..."

Misfit Animations Says:

I agree Cy that was a awesome poem definetly worth some praise. Also Jet you made a good parody.

Kayogi Says:

Aww, that was a heart-felt, feel-good pice. :D
The rhyme scheme was excellent, and I loved the last two lines of the second and third um...whatever they're called.

It makes me go :'D.

yiang Says:

aw...haha thats so cute and sweet of you..
but ya shouldnt haff...;_;
now i feel bad...hehe
but thanks a million! you're the world and more :)