Br1ngz 4 t34r 2 m4 3y3 d4wg, g00d w0rk!
Parody: Shitting in the moonlight, staring at the stars. Two lovers share the night tonight, in eachother's cars. As they shit, in-hand, their thighs begin to meet. As do their lustfull hips, in a kiss that tastes like feet. The young man parts his hips to say, Hunny I feel so gay. extended: And there they sit, same as ever, he took a dump, she pulled the lever, their toilet cloged, and water flowed, look out world, it's their mother lode!
That's really cute actually! "awwwww kyle and yvette in a tree..."
I agree Cy that was a awesome poem definetly worth some praise. Also Jet you made a good parody.
Aww, that was a heart-felt, feel-good pice. :D The rhyme scheme was excellent, and I loved the last two lines of the second and third um...whatever they're called. It makes me go :'D.
aw...haha thats so cute and sweet of you.. but ya shouldnt haff...;_; now i feel bad...hehe but thanks a million! you're the world and more :)
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Wanker The Gangster Says:
Br1ngz 4 t34r 2 m4 3y3 d4wg, g00d w0rk!
Ladada2001 Says:
Parody:
Shitting in the moonlight,
staring at the stars.
Two lovers share the night tonight,
in eachother's cars.
As they shit, in-hand,
their thighs begin to meet.
As do their lustfull hips,
in a kiss that tastes like feet.
The young man parts his hips to say,
Hunny I feel so gay.
extended:
And there they sit,
same as ever,
he took a dump,
she pulled the lever,
their toilet cloged,
and water flowed,
look out world,
it's their mother lode!
Marc69 Says:
That's really cute actually! "awwwww kyle and yvette in a tree..."

Misfit Animations Says:
I agree Cy that was a awesome poem definetly worth some praise. Also Jet you made a good parody.
Kayogi Says:
Aww, that was a heart-felt, feel-good pice. :D
The rhyme scheme was excellent, and I loved the last two lines of the second and third um...whatever they're called.
It makes me go :'D.
yiang Says:
aw...haha thats so cute and sweet of you..
you're the world and more :)

but ya shouldnt haff...;_;
now i feel bad...hehe
but thanks a million!