The clothing folds don't seem to follow the action- specifically his trousers. He appears to be moving to our left, so the clothes would be thrown to the right somewhat.
Also, did you use a line of action for this? It helps to use one for a guide to make things look more active.
I didn't actually, I'll know to now. Also Th folds are trying to convey a suspended look, like it's a tense situation, but I guess I didn't do it well enough.
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Phantom shadow Says:
It looks good!
Keep up the good work!
zhandess Says:
The clothing folds don't seem to follow the action- specifically his trousers. He appears to be moving to our left, so the clothes would be thrown to the right somewhat.
Also, did you use a line of action for this? It helps to use one for a guide to make things look more active.
JazzyJ Says:
I didn't actually, I'll know to now. Also Th folds are trying to convey a suspended look, like it's a tense situation, but I guess I didn't do it well enough.
Thanks for the input