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Do You know the Song?
You might want to hold your breath
As You Jump Into the current
And If You dont know the Song by now
Better then anytime to learn it
" Mr President, Wrap your heart up in the flag.
And Mail it to the U.S.Of A
For the Rich Republican White Man.
Damn Dirty Liberals and their Overactive Minds.
Mr Police man forgot to sign the paper so I didnt pay the fine "
Singing underwater
Wading in the Deep end
Everyone Fold Your hands
" Mother Mary, Amen "
The Music is drowning
And We can't do a thing
Just hope to close your eyes
and hear the Old Wiseman sing
Mothers Wrap up their Children, Pray they dont loose their Breath
Mister is Holding his Misses close, she hasnt started breathing yet
And the Old Man's in the corner
Playing a Song to You
He's singing about how His Wife and Kids didnt make it through
And how All the money in the world isnt enough
Because Getting back the Life he Lost
Is going to be tough
And He Looked at the Children
Clinging to their Dads and Moms
He said: " If You know the Lyrics then please sing along "
" Mr President, Wrap your heart up in the flag.
And Mail it to the U.S.Of A
For the Rich Republican White Man.
Damn Dirty Liberals and their Overactive Minds.
Mr Police man forgot to sign the paper so I didnt pay the fine "
Everybody slowly, Passes it on
And Makes sure everyone knows the Lyrics to the song...
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Comments
SomewhereDark Says:
Awesome, first commment me! ASPO;'gds

what an amazing story, this really hooked me.
i'm infamously known as a skimmer and i don't read things very often even if their short. the fact that this even got my attention means you did quite a swell job, lol. keep it up.
this would make a great song, btw.
which means if i had a band, i'd ask you if i could make a song out of it.
Fierras Says:
I always have had trouble with poetry. I think I told you that once.

Unlike a drawing I don't know what constitutes good writting. I enjoy what you write and you expressing yourself this way. I can't give any criticts to wich I do not know much of nor can I help you becoming a better writter for I am not one myself.
Keep writting and I'l keep reading
Bunnii Says:
"Mr Police man forgot to sign the paper so I didnt pay the fine"
I have no idea why, but I really like that line.
very moving. I like it.
renner Says:
aww mary you know i love it. sorry i wasnt in skoo' today. i just woke up.
f end Says:
I'm glad you made reference to the rich musical heritage of New Orleans, the repetative lyrics are very nice, you can really feel the mood of despair in this and that is a huge accomplishment. You have a way with words that just really makes me happy.